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Average emissions of carbon dioxide by 5 countries

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The graph below illustrates average carbon dioxide exhales per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal for 40 years from 1967 to 2007. Overall the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in Italy and Portugal showed an upward trend whereas it should a downward trend for United Kingdom and fluctuated for Sweden. In 1967, the average carbon dioxide emission per person for Portugal and Italy were nearly amounted to 1 and 4 but after 40 years in 2007 they nearly inclined to 25 and 8. In 1967 the average was nearly 11 for each person in United Kingdom but they successfully declined it closed to 8 in 2007. The average was ascended from 8 to 10 metric ton between 1967 to 1977 in Sweden but they reduced it almost from 10 25 metric tons between 1977 to 2007.

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 in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal for 40 years from 1967 to 2007. Overall
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