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no pedestrians for visually impaired people

no pedestrians for visually impaired people 1bEPW
The issue of the lack of pedestrian facilities for visually impaired people in a number of developing countries has aroused society discussion in light of the numerous adverse effects caused for the visually handicapped. The shortage of these special facilities leads to difficulties for them in moving and unwanted accidents. To handle these problems, first of all, we need to install the traffic light systems with audible “beeping” signals, which means when the lights turn green, it is their turn to cross the road. However, each individual oughts to raise awareness of these special signals to assure the visually challenged pedestrians' safety. Secondly, using various types of surfaces to indicate the place for the disabled. Take tactile road as a good example, because of the roughness of the surfaces, the visually handicapped find it easy to identify the crossing point of a road, and this will help to minimize dangers. Besides, normal people can realize the dedicated crossing point and prioritize people with visual impairment. It is vital for everyone, especially people with. Supporting with action like supply traffic light with sound or make special ground for the disabled, we all can help them have better lives. Sometimes, merely one small action from you can make someone's life better.
The issue of the lack of pedestrian facilities for
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visually
impaired
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in a number of
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developing countries
has aroused society discussion in
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light
of the numerous adverse effects caused for the
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visually
handicapped. The shortage of these special facilities leads to difficulties for them in moving and unwanted accidents. To handle these problems,
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first of all
, we need to install the traffic
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light
systems with audible “beeping” signals, which means when the
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lights
turn green, it is their turn to cross the road.
However
, each individual
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oughts
to raise awareness of these special signals to assure the
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visually
challenged pedestrians' safety.
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good
example,
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because
of the roughness of the surfaces, the
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visually
handicapped find it easy to identify the crossing point of a road, and this will
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help
to minimize
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dangers
.
Besides
, normal
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people
can realize the dedicated crossing point and prioritize
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people
with visual impairment. It is vital for everyone,
especially
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people
with. Supporting with action like supply traffic
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light
with sound or
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make
special ground for the disabled, we all can
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help
them have better
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lives
.
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one
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action from you can
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make
someone's life better.
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IELTS essay no pedestrians for visually impaired people

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
209 words
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