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Write an essay that explain how you see yourself and how other people see you

Write an essay that explain how you see yourself and how other people see you ebxJB
Humans are a special species, we are not merely hunting food and protect our group to live. Each of us has a different personality to assert ourselves. Several people are confident, ambitious. On the contrary, there’re lots of bashful people. I consider myself confident, hot-tempered, self-conscious, ambitious, responsible, and stubborn. The reason why I am ambitious is when I’m passionate about something I want to be one of the best people in that field. Also, I am versatile, consequently, I can do lots of things in a short amount of time, that a huge characteristic to consolidate my ambition. About being hot-tempered, I can easily become frustrated with everyone because they don’t support my ideas, or they cut off my speech. In the same way, I’m stubborn due to the fact I usually don’t listen to other advice and try to do everything alone. The reason why I consider myself self-conscious and responsible is that I am always conscious of what I need to do right now. I usually make up a to-do list for 1 day or 1 week or even a whole month. Self-consciousness assists a lot in my responsibility in my growing up and studying journey. That is all the personality I think I fit well in. But those are what I think about myself. What about the other? Coincidently, they also have the same opinion about my personality. Although they don’t say it directly to me, I understand that from my observation. I notice a lot of details when someone is speaking or cooperating with me like: “Are they comfortable, or are they discomforted? ” That is the reason why I know what people see about me. My personality is influenced by my parents. I am like my dad as I inherit from him being hot-tempered and ambitious. It is easy to understand that due to the genetic. But the difference between me and my dad is sometimes I have to remind him what he should do. On the other hand, I am also like my mom by being self-conscious. Not just parents or family members can leave an impact on your personality, your friends, your residence, your birth order, traditions, and lots more things can also affect your personalities. How your neighbors communicate with each other can affect a lot on your personality. For example, your neighbors are swearing a lot, so when you’re grown up, you could swear like them. But it just does not work on me. In conclusion, you can see yourself differently from others who see you. Also, your personalities are influenced by lots of elements.
Humans are a special species, we are not
merely
hunting food and protect our group to
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live
. Each of us has a
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different
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personality
to assert ourselves. Several
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people
are confident,
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ambitious
.
On the contrary
, there’re
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lots
of bashful
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people
. I consider myself confident, hot-tempered, self-conscious,
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ambitious
, responsible, and stubborn. The reason why I am
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ambitious
is when I’m passionate about something I want to be one of the best
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people
in that field.
Also
, I am versatile,
consequently
, I can do
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lots
of things in a short amount of time, that a huge characteristic to consolidate my ambition. About being hot-tempered, I can
easily
become frustrated with everyone
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because
they don’t support my
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ideas
, or they
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cut
off my speech.
In the same way
, I’m stubborn due to the fact I
usually
don’t listen to
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other
advice and try to do everything alone. The reason why I consider myself self-conscious and responsible is that I am always conscious of what I need to do right
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now
. I
usually
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make
up a to-do list for 1 day or 1 week or even a whole month. Self-consciousness assists a
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lot
in my responsibility in my growing up and studying journey.
That is
all the
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personality
I
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think
I fit well in.

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But
those are what I
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think
about myself. What about the
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other
?
Coincidently
, they
also
have the same opinion about my
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personality
. Although they don’t say it
directly
to me, I understand that from my observation. I notice a
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lot
of
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details
when someone is speaking or cooperating with me like: “Are they comfortable, or are they discomforted? ”
That is
the reason why I know what
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people
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see
about me.

My
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personality
is influenced
by my parents. I am like my dad as I inherit from him being hot-tempered and
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ambitious
. It is easy to understand that due to the genetic.
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But
the difference between me and my dad is
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sometimes
I
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have to
remind him what he should do. On the
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other
hand, I am
also
like my mom by being self-conscious. Not
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just
parents or family members can
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leave
an impact on your
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personality
, your friends, your residence, your birth order, traditions, and
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lots
more things can
also
affect your personalities. How your neighbors communicate with each
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other
can affect a
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lot
on your
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personality
.
For example
, your neighbors are swearing a
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lot
,
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so
when you’re grown up, you could swear like them.
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But
it
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just
does not work on me.
In conclusion
, you can
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see
yourself
differently
from others who
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see
you.
Also
, your personalities
are influenced
by
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lots
of elements.
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IELTS essay Write an essay that explain how you see yourself and how other people see you

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
435 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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