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Tell a situation/ story about an ethical problem that you know.

Tell a situation/ story about an ethical problem that you know. YdMLK
When I was an 11 grader, there was a serious ethical problem that appeared in my school. One of the most famous teachers suddenly quitted his job, which made a big surprise for both other teachers and students who knew him. Due to the fact that no one learned exactly the reason, students started spreading many rumors. Fortunately, my friend was a witness in this stunning matter. She told me that this teacher was a sexual harasser. He had sent the victim pornographic pictures and had asked for her sensitive photographs. How could he do that immoral behavior as a teacher? I got shocked when hearing the truth. As a result, the victim had moved to another school, and this harasser got fired from the school. I could sympathize with this friend that she could be obsessed with those dirty behaviors by her teacher forever. Since then, no one heard the true story because of protecting the later life of the victim
When I was an 11 grader, there was a serious ethical problem that appeared in my school. One of the most
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surprise for both other
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teachers
and students who knew him. Due to the fact that no one learned exactly the reason, students
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teacher
was a sexual harasser. He had
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sent
the victim pornographic pictures and had
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asked for
her sensitive photographs. How could he do that immoral behavior as a
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teacher
? I
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got
shocked when hearing the truth.
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, the victim had
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moved
to another school, and this harasser
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got
fired from the school. I could sympathize with this friend that she could
be obsessed
with those dirty behaviors by her
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teacher
forever. Since then, no one heard the true story
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of protecting the later life of the
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victim
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IELTS essay Tell a situation/ story about an ethical problem that you know.

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