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It is believed by some that animals must be used for testing for medical researches. Others argue that this should be stopped. This essay will discuss both sides and give my opinion. People’s life is valued more than that of animal, that is why all medicines are tested on animals before providing it to people. First, when the tablets or other medicines are produced, researchers try it on animals in order to make sure that it is valid to use for people. By doing this, they can develop the products, or even save lots of people’s life. For example, one of the famous companies test their products on animals and only after that, sell them to another companies. Without animals, people cannot survive in this world. Animals are one of the most crucial part of organic life on Earth, due to this, if they are caused any harm or disappear, the biological system will be damaged too. This means that people will be in a problematic and disastrous situation where only surviving will take place. For instance, if people imagine their life without meat or vegetables, they will definitely be shocked of the severe consequences. Personally, I think that animals are equally important as human beings, and people should take care of them instead of making experiments. All things considered, animals are part of the nature and they are as valuable as people and green vegetation to the biological system. I believe that if companies stop their experiments and tests on animals, our life will be far more better and our future children will have everything that is sufficient to them.
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some
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animals
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must
be
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used
for testing for medical researches. Others argue that this should be
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stopped
. This essay will discuss both sides and give my opinion.

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People
’s
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life
is valued
more than that of
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animal
,
that is
why all medicines are
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tested
on
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animals
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before
providing it to
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people
.
First
, when the tablets or other medicines
are produced
, researchers try it on
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animals
in order to
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make
sure that it is valid to
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use
for
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people
. By doing this, they can develop the products, or even save lots of
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people’s
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life
.
For example
, one of the
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famous
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companies
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test
their products on
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animals
and
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only
after that, sell them to another
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companies
.

Without
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animals
,
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people
cannot survive in this world.
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Animals
are one of the most crucial part of organic
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life
on Earth, due to this, if they
are caused
any harm or disappear, the biological system will
be damaged
too. This means that
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people
will be in a problematic and disastrous situation where
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only
surviving will take place.
For instance
, if
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people
imagine their
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life
without meat or vegetables, they will definitely
be shocked
of the severe consequences.
Personally
, I
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think
that
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animals
are
equally
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important
as human beings, and
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people
should take care of them
instead
of making experiments.

All things considered,
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animals
are part of the
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nature and
they are as valuable as
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people
and green vegetation to the biological system. I believe that if
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companies
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stop
their experiments and
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tests
on
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animals
, our
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life
will be far
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more better
and our future children will have everything
that is
sufficient to them.
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IELTS essay Write an essay on this topic with example and your own opinion.

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4 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
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