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metamorphosis by kafka, the theme of Alienation

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Alienation of Gregor Samsa in metamorphosis by Kafka is vividly seen through the story. As a fact, Gregor a traveling salesman and woke up from an awful dream to find himself transformed into a monster (vermin), which makes him alienated from his surrounding people and from his own humanity. In a sense, Gregor was alienated from his family after his metamorphosis, as they consider him to be both externally and internally changed and view him as a virement. By waking up as an insect and losing his job, Gregor experienced the alienation from his dear ones. However, that doesn't mean that he hasn't been alienated before his metamorphosis. Rather, he was actually alienated even before. As working as a traveling salesman made him alienated from the society. To illustrate, Gregor never maintain a relationship with the previous ones. Which results in having no real connections with the society. Furthermore, the alienation Gregor Samsa was subjected to from his work consequent into an alienation from the society. In a sense, Gregor was isolated even from his own family. Gregor was alienated even from his family after his metamorphosis. Realistically speaking, in a number of exploitative families, when a person is no longer able to perform his duty as a supporter of the house, even if he was the only a dear one as the onlymotive for staying with that person is exploitation. This is the same what happened to Gregor, after he has been supporting his family for so long. He got sick one day and stopped backing up the family. He become then a burden. Consequently, he was pitfully out casted. However, his sister Grete out casted and despised him to the extent of proposing getting the right of him, Gregor's father was no less than his sister. In like manner, Gregor's father was no less than his daughter, he is also despise his son after his transformation. Despite of all the good things Gregor had done to his family, which demonstrate Kafka's idea that even the elosent people to you won't support you in the darkest moments. And what's more, they alienated him after getting job, and isolated him by moving his room's fournitures and transfering into storage. They didn't arise if Gregor ( met problems. . . . Just external or also internal. Additionally, the external alienation wasn't the only one that Gregor experience. He also experienced being alienated from his own self, by the virtue of the job he was doing. To clarify, if you don't have a job, that, fulfill your personal needs, that also, fulfill asserting satisfaction, you fell alienated from your own self. To put it in nutshell, Gregor had been subjected to all the kind of alienation which makes him as a victim of the society.
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in
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through the story. As a fact, Gregor a traveling salesman and woke up from an awful dream to find himself transformed into a monster (vermin), which
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makes
him
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alienated
from his surrounding
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people
and from his
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own
humanity. In a sense, Gregor was
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alienated
from his
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family
after his
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metamorphosis
, as they consider him to be both
externally
and
internally
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changed
and view him as a
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virement
. By waking up as an insect and losing his
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job
, Gregor experienced the
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alienation
from his dear
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ones
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However
, that doesn't mean that he hasn't been
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alienated
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before
his
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even
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working as a traveling salesman made him
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alienated
from the
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society
. To illustrate, Gregor never maintain a relationship with the previous
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ones
.
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Which
results in having no real connections with the
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society
.
Furthermore
, the
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alienation
Gregor
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Samsa
was subjected
to from his work consequent into an
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alienation
from the
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. In a sense, Gregor
was isolated
even from his
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own
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family
. Gregor was
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alienated
even from his
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family
after his
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metamorphosis
.
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speaking, in a number of exploitative
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families
, when a person is no longer able to perform his duty as a supporter of the
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house
, even if he was the
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only
a dear one as the
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onlymotive
for staying with that person is exploitation. This is the same what happened to Gregor, after he has been supporting his
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for
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so
long. He
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got
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stopped
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family
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and despised him to the extent of proposing getting the right of him, Gregor's father was no less than his sister. In like manner, Gregor's father was no less than his daughter, he is
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despise
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idea
that even the
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elosent
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people
to you won't support you in the darkest moments. And what's more, they
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him after getting
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fournitures
and
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transfering
into storage. They didn't arise if Gregor
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one that Gregor experience. He
also
experienced being
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alienated
from his
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own
self, by the virtue of the
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job
he was doing. To clarify, if you don't have a
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job
, that, fulfill your personal needs, that
also
, fulfill asserting satisfaction, you fell
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alienated
from your
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own
self. To put it in nutshell, Gregor had
been subjected
to all the kind of
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alienation
which
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makes
him as a victim of the
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society
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IELTS essay metamorphosis by kafka, the theme of Alienation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
463 words
5.5
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