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Cash vs Cards, what do u prefer and why?

Cash vs Cards, what do u prefer and why? pLJW0
There are many adventages using the card or good cash. As mine both of them is easy, to use cash and credit card is comfortamble when you do shopping. This essay will give information on importance of credit card and cash. Nowadays most of people use credit card baceuse they feel themselves not dangerous. I carry a suitable amount of cash in my wallet, but I’m now carrying a couple of hundreds and my credit cards only. This way, I find things more safe and wouldn’t have to worry a lot of if someone robs my handbag. Besides you can earn bonus, gifts, when you do shopping with your card like this. When you go to some restoran, bar, travel you can get discount with your card However, in a few cases some places don’t have a machine to accept cards and urgent time cash is almost always the bailout. Many people who is earn finance have voiced above the internet their opinion against using a cash. I agree with them about several issue. But In addition inattentive spending and financial habits will land you in trouble. As well as balanced and control are individuals. I belive that maybe after years, all of countries over the word will be used only card but not now because Lots of countries suffer from financial problems that’s why it is absurd now. Based on card is safety for your money some consider that we need cash in urgent time others claim that some countries isn’t ready for this system. I suppose that both of them are importance for me
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adventages
using the
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card
or
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good
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cash
. As mine both of them is easy, to
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use
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cash
and
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credit
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card
is
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comfortamble
when you
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do shopping
. This essay will give information on importance of
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credit
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card
and cash.

Nowadays most of
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people
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use
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credit
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card
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baceuse
they feel themselves not
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dangerous
. I carry a suitable amount of
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cash
in my wallet,
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but
I’m
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now
carrying a couple of hundreds and my
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credit
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cards
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only
. This way, I find things more safe and wouldn’t
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have to
worry
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a lot of
if someone robs my handbag.
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Besides
you can earn bonus, gifts, when you
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do shopping
with your
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card
like this. When you go to
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some
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restoran
, bar, travel you can
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get
discount with your
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card


However
, in a few cases
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some
places don’t have a machine to accept
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cards
and urgent time
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cash
is almost always the bailout.
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Many
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people
who
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is
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earn
finance have voiced above the internet their opinion against using a
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cash
. I
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agree
with them about
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.
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In addition
inattentive spending and financial habits will land you in trouble.
As well
as balanced and control are individuals.
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I belive
that maybe after years,
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all of countries
over the word will be
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used
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only
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card
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not
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now
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because
Lots of countries suffer from financial problems that’s why it is absurd
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now
.

Based on
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card
is safety for your money
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some
consider that we need
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cash
in urgent time others claim that
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some
countries isn’t ready for this system. I suppose that both of them are importance for
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me
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IELTS essay Cash vs Cards, what do u prefer and why?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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