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write an essay on the effects of pollution and daily waste created by humans. What measures should we take to make things better?

write an essay on the effects of pollution and daily waste created by humans. What measures should we take to make things better? jVJqL

Numerous effects of pollution by humans and discarded waste is affecting us in several ways. I agree on this issue and shall delineate my view in the upcoming paragraph. Firstly, the air we breathe and the water we consume are all negatively affected by humans. We are mixing things in natural resources which can cause harm to us. Moreover, we blame nonliving things and do not see the reason behind them. To cite an example- we make faults in factories, cars, burning crops, and several other things whereas behind all this are humans. We do not accept our blunder and due to that, we are not able to make it right. For example- people do not throw waste in the dustbin to make it recycled and they burn it when they see it on streets, it cases pollution as when we walk on a street we see a lot of garbage gathered in some corners like the one who is witnessing it can be the same as who the next day will throw it. Secondly, I think even pupils focus on these things but they just follow the pattern of what their elders are doing. Measures to improvise it should be an example of recycling as it is becoming increasingly important. Next, more emphasis should be given to the invention of biodegradable material so that we can live a more environment friendly life. Moreover, management of industrial waste. In conclusion, we should make our earth greener and should take responsibility to clean it and protect our flora and fauna for upcoming generations

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agree
 on this issue and shall delineate my view in the upcoming paragraph.

Firstly
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affected
 by humans. We are mixing things in natural resources which can cause harm to us. Moreover
, we blame nonliving things and do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the reason behind them. To cite an example- we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
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this are
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make
 it right. For example
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make
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recycled and
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see
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a lot of
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some
 corners like the one who is witnessing it can be the same as Did you mean "whom"?whom
who
 the next
 day will throw it.

Secondly
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 even pupils focus on these things This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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just
 follow the pattern of what their elders are doing. Measures to improvise it should be an example of recycling as it is becoming increasingly
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important
. Next
, more emphasis should be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to the invention of biodegradable material This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a more environment friendly life. Moreover
, management of industrial waste.

In conclusion
, we should You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 our earth greener and should take responsibility to clean it and protect our flora and fauna for upcoming generations