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Many people today opt for buying their meals instead of cooking themselves

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Many people today opt for buying their meals instead of cooking themselves. There are many reasons for such trends like their busy schedules, easy access to a variety of cuisines and home deliveries. On one side it has made life easier while on the other hand it is accompanied by various health issues as well. The merits and demerits of purchasing food online will be discussed in the below paragraphs respectively.
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opt for buying their meals
instead
of cooking themselves. There are
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many
reasons for such trends like their busy schedules, easy access to a variety of cuisines and home deliveries. On one side it has made life easier while
on the other hand
it
is accompanied
by various health issues
as well
. The merits and demerits of purchasing food online will
be discussed
in the below paragraphs
respectively
.
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IELTS essay Many people today opt for buying their meals instead of cooking themselves

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
71 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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