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Write an essay on natural disasters

Write an essay on natural disasters 2PGyb
Nature has provided us with all the things we need to live our life but we humans are still so ambitious to get further and that too against the wishes of nature. And when the human become so ambitious to even challenge the nature, go beyond rules made by it, nature starts taking its disasters shape. We humans have always witnessed the disasters that come up after sometime and make us believe that nature is supreme. We can take the present example of pandemic as well, that how it come up and overpowered all other things. The country which is said to be the superpower please also drowned bye it so we can imagine what the small countries are facing. It is always said that these kinds of pandemic come up once in every hundred years for 4 to 5 years and make us behind the world for or at least 20 years. It is said that when one species rises up to such an extent that no other can be seen then nature take its form and wipe it out and we can see this through the examples of great species of woolly Mammoth and Dinosaurs that how an asteroid destroyed their existence on earth and now they can be only seen in books. The nature give its warning to humans through small disasters like landslides and through large sometimes like earthquake, floods. Many of the countries are devastated by these disasters. We all can remember the tsunami of Indonesia of you 2004 and earthquake of Bhuj of year 2001 which are considered to be the deadliest disasters of the world. Thus we should respect what are nature has provided us with and should take care of it otherwise that day is not far when we all will also be find wiped out by one of those deadliest natural disasters.
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Nature
has provided us with all the things we need to
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live
our life
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but
we
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humans
are
still
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so
ambitious to
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get
further
and that too against the wishes of
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nature
. And when the
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human
become
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so
ambitious to even challenge the
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nature
, go beyond
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rules
made by it,
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nature
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starts
taking its
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disasters
shape.

We
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humans
have always witnessed the
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disasters
that
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come
up after sometime and
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make
us believe that
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nature
is supreme. We can take the present example of pandemic
as well
, that how it
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come
up and overpowered all other things. The country which
is said
to be the superpower
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please
also
drowned bye it
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so
we can imagine what the
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small
countries are facing. It is always said that these kinds of pandemic
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come
up once in every hundred years for 4 to 5 years and
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make
us behind the world for or at least 20 years.

It
is said
that when one species rises up to such an extent that no other can be
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seen
then
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nature
take its form and wipe it
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out and
we can
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see
this through the examples of great species of
woolly
Mammoth and Dinosaurs that how an asteroid
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destroyed
their existence on earth and
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now
they can be
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only
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seen
in books.

The
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nature
give its warning to
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humans
through
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small
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disasters
like landslides and through large
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sometimes
like earthquake, floods.
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Many
of the countries
are devastated
by these
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disasters
. We all can remember the tsunami of Indonesia of you 2004 and earthquake of
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Bhuj
of year 2001 which
are considered
to be the deadliest
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disasters
of the world.

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Thus
we should respect what are
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nature
has provided us with and should take care of it
otherwise
that day is not far when we all will
also
be
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find
wiped out by one of those deadliest natural
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disasters
.
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IELTS essay Write an essay on natural disasters

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
311 words
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