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a job you would like to do for a day

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Since I was young, I have admired the MCs of TV station a lot and I really wanted to be like them. Until now, becoming a MC is still my dream job that I want to do for a day. As far as I know, to be a MC requires me some requisite qualifications and experiences. The first requirement is that I need to have an extensive knowledge. Because if the MC has a narrow knowledge, it’ll will be easy to misunderstand the problem and say the wrong thing. Secondly, MC is the person who leads the program, conveys information to listeners, viewers mainly through the voice. If the MC has a good voice, good communication skill, speaks fluently, the information will become much more attractive. Last but not least, it is the process continuous learning and practicing to improve the skills and to become a perfect MC.
Since I was young, I have admired the
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MCs
of TV station a lot and I
really
wanted to be like them. Until
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now
, becoming
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a
MC is
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my dream job that I want to do for a day. As far as I know, to be
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MC requires me
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some
requisite qualifications and experiences. The
first
requirement is that I need to have an extensive knowledge.
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Because
if the MC has a narrow knowledge, it’ll will be easy to misunderstand the problem and say the
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wrong
thing.
Secondly
, MC is the person who leads the program, conveys information to listeners, viewers
mainly
through the voice. If the MC has a
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good
voice,
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good
communication
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skill
, speaks
fluently
, the information will become much more attractive. Last
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but
not least, it is the process continuous learning and practicing to
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improve
the
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skills
and to become a perfect MC.
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IELTS essay a job you would like to do for a day

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