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Write an essay of at least 250 words describing the advantages and disadvantages of living in modern suburbia.

Write an essay of at least 250 words describing the advantages and disadvantages of living in modern suburbia. L3JD3
Choosing the perfect spot to live in nowadays is a challenging task for humans. They can stay in a variety of places to settle in such as the large city, the suburbs, and even the peaceful countryside. This essay will discuss the positives and negatives of living in modern suburbia. To begin with, there are several reasons why many individuals opt to live in the suburbs. First, because they are people who want quieter, cleaner, and more environmentally friendly. In contrast to the bustling city, suburbia will feature communities with homes clustered together. Instead of playing on the pavement or walking to a public park, your children may play in your front, side, or backyard. In comparison to living in the city, there won't be nearly as many automobiles passing by. Furthermore, compared to living in the city, there will be many fewer automobiles on the road. Second, if you're bored of the city's hustle and bustle, the suburbs are a great spot to get away from it all. While there will be less public transit available, you won't have to rush to your stop to catch the 6: 45 a. m. train to work every day. You won't have to deal with the hassle of looking for a parking place, let alone paying for it, everywhere you go. Finally, you may own a spacious house for a reasonable price that even suits your budget when compared to an apartment in the city. However, there are some drawbacks to living in modern suburbs. First, many suburbs do not have public transportation, fewer colleges, universities, and hospitals can make things a bit more difficult. Suburbia is probably not the place for you if you are the efficient, active sort who craves continual adventure. You may be frustrated by the fewer trips and slower pace of life. There will be fewer restaurants and nightlife options as well. As a result, huge concerts, athletic events, and festivals will have to be sacrificed, attended less regularly, or require great distance travel to reach. In conclusion, I personally believe that the benefits of living in the suburbs outweigh its drawbacks, and people should be encouraged to do so.
Choosing the perfect spot to
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live
nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: "nowadays".
in nowadays
is a challenging task for humans. They can stay in a variety of places to settle in such as the large city, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suburbs
, and even the peaceful countryside. This essay will discuss the positives and negatives of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
in modern suburbia.

To
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begin
with, there are several reasons why
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many
individuals opt to
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live
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suburbs
.
First
,
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because
they are
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people
who want quieter, cleaner, and more
environmentally
friendly.
In contrast
to the bustling city, suburbia will feature communities with homes clustered together.
Instead
of playing on the pavement or walking to a public park, your children may play in your front, side, or backyard.
In comparison
to
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living
in the city, there won't be
nearly
as
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many
automobiles passing by.
Furthermore
, compared to
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living
in the city, there will be
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many
fewer automobiles on the road. Second, if you're
In standard English it's more accepted to use "bored with" or "bored by".
bored of
the city's hustle and bustle, the
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suburbs
are a great spot to
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get
away from it all. While there will be less public transit available, you won't
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have to
rush to your
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stop
to catch the 6: 45 a. m. train to work every day. You won't
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have to
deal with the hassle of looking for a parking place,
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let
alone paying for it, everywhere you go.
Finally
, you may
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own
a spacious
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house
for a reasonable price that even suits your budget when compared to an apartment in the city.

However
, there are
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some
drawbacks to
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living
in modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suburbs
.
First
,
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many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suburbs
do not have public transportation, fewer colleges, universities, and hospitals can
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make
things a bit more difficult. Suburbia is
probably
not the place for you if you are the efficient, active sort who craves continual adventure. You may
be frustrated
by the fewer trips and slower pace of life. There will be fewer restaurants and nightlife options
as well
.
As a result
, huge concerts, athletic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
, and festivals will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be sacrificed
, attended less
regularly
, or require great distance travel to reach.

In conclusion
, I
personally
believe that the benefits of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suburbs
outweigh its drawbacks, and
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people
should
be encouraged
to do
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so
.
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IELTS essay Write an essay of at least 250 words describing the advantages and disadvantages of living in modern suburbia.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
363 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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