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write an essay of about words describing a loved one.

write an essay of about words describing a loved one. 95Y2j

My family have four people: my father, my mother, my young sister and me. Today, I will write about my father. He is 50 years old. He is a Worker. My father tall about 1m65, and he is medium built. He has dark skin. His hair is short black. He has oval face. He has straight nose. His eyes is big. He has a mustache. His forehead is wide and high. His eyebrows are black and bushy, so my eyebrows are too. My father's hand big and rough because he does a lot of work. He loves us very much. He is hard working. In the life, he is easy - going and funny. He likes help every people. He can do fix electrical. He usually get up at 6: 00 am and wake us up at 6: 30 am. In the afternoon, he runs around stadium. I loves my father very much.

My family have four This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
: my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
, my mother, my young sister and me. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
, I will write about my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
. He is 50 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. He is a Worker. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 tall about 1m65, and he is medium built. He has dark skin. His hair is short black. He has oval face. He has straight Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "nosed".nosed
nose
. His eyes You should probably use: "are".are
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
. He has a mustache. His forehead is wide and high. His eyebrows are black and bushy, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 my eyebrows are too. My father's hand This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 and rough This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he does This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 work. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiresadores
loves
 us This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much. He is This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.hard-workinghardworking
hard working
. In the life, he is easy Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 going and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:amusinghumorous
funny
. He likes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 every This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. He can do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 electrical. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
He
usually
The pronoun 'He' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "gets", "got".getsgot
get
 up at 6: 00 am and wake us up at 6: 30 am. In the afternoon, he runs around stadium. I The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "love"love
loves
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much. 