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write an essay of about words describing a loved one.

write an essay of about words describing a loved one. 95Y2j
My family have four people: my father, my mother, my young sister and me. Today, I will write about my father. He is 50 years old. He is a Worker. My father tall about 1m65, and he is medium built. He has dark skin. His hair is short black. He has oval face. He has straight nose. His eyes is big. He has a mustache. His forehead is wide and high. His eyebrows are black and bushy, so my eyebrows are too. My father's hand big and rough because he does a lot of work. He loves us very much. He is hard working. In the life, he is easy - going and funny. He likes help every people. He can do fix electrical. He usually get up at 6: 00 am and wake us up at 6: 30 am. In the afternoon, he runs around stadium. I loves my father very much.
My family have four
people
: my
father
, my mother, my young sister and me.
Today
, I will write about my
father
. He is 50 years
old
. He is a Worker. My
father
tall about 1m65, and he is medium built. He has dark skin. His hair is short black. He has oval face. He has straight
nose
. His eyes
is
big
. He has a mustache. His forehead is wide and high. His eyebrows are black and bushy,
so
my eyebrows are too. My father's hand
big
and rough
because
he does
a lot of
work. He
loves
us
very
much. He is
hard working
. In the life, he is easy
-
going and
funny
. He likes
help
every
people
. He can do
fix
electrical.
He
usually
get
up at 6: 00 am and wake us up at 6: 30 am. In the afternoon, he runs around stadium. I
loves
my
father
very
much.
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IELTS essay write an essay of about words describing a loved one.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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