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here are thousands of languages in the world today. Some of them are strong languages spoken by many millions of people, while others are spoken by smaller groups of people, sometimes numbering in the hundreds. As languages die, benefits accrue to human society, but also drawbacks. It is certainly not advantageous for everybody everywhere.

here are thousands of languages in the world today. Some of them are strong languages spoken by many millions of people, while others are spoken by smaller groups of people, sometimes numbering in the hundreds. As languages die, benefits accrue to human society, but also drawbacks. It is certainly not advantageous for everybody everywhere. 6Np8j
There are thousands of languages in the world today. Some of them are strong languages spoken by many millions of people, while others are spoken by smaller groups of people, sometimes numbering in the hundreds. As languages die, benefits accrue to human society, but also drawbacks. It is certainly not advantageous for everybody everywhere. From a practical point of view, having fewer languages can lead to greater ease in communication. This is because when people share a language, then information and ideas can flow more easily, which is of utmost importance in a globalised world. In addition, there is an economic advantage, or economies of scale, since information can be presented in written form in greater bulk, meaning there is no need for translations, which can be costly. Thus, internationally, the flow of ideas and information is facilitated through the common language. There is another side, though. First of all, those who have lost a language have also lost a culture, a way of expressing themselves, and a way of understanding the world and their experience of the world. They will never be able to express themselves fully in their new language. Secondly, the quality of communication in the common language is limited. The reason for this is that people are writing and reading in an acquired language, not the mother tongue. Also, this acquired language may simply be unable to express some of the culturally-bound ideas of the non-native speaker. In brief, then, language death is a tragedy. Those whose language dies lose part of their identity, and a way to give expression to their deep thoughts and feelings. For the rest of the world, there is a loss of diversity. Along with the language, a whole culture and way of expressing this culture die. Things of deep human value that could be expressed before are now silenced.
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languages
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, while others
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,
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languages
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die
, benefits accrue to human society,
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but
also
drawbacks. It is
certainly
not advantageous for everybody everywhere.

From a practical point of view, having fewer
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languages
can lead to greater
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ease
in communication. This is
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because
when
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people
share a
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language
, then information and
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ideas
can flow more
easily
, which is of utmost importance in a
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globalised
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world
.
In addition
, there is an economic advantage, or economies of scale, since information can
be presented
in written form in greater bulk, meaning there is no need for translations, which can be costly.
Thus
,
internationally
, the flow of
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ideas
and information
is facilitated
through the common language.

There is another side, though.
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First of all
, those who have lost a
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language
have
also
lost a culture, a way of expressing themselves, and a way of understanding the
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world
and their experience of the
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world
. They will never be able to express themselves
fully
in their new
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language
.
Secondly
, the quality of communication in the common
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language
is limited
.
The reason for this is
that
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people
are writing and reading in an acquired
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language
, not the mother tongue.
Also
, this acquired
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language
may
simply
be unable to express
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some of the
culturally
-bound
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ideas
of the non-native speaker.

In brief
, then,
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language
death is a tragedy. Those whose
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language
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dies
lose part of their identity, and a way to give expression to their deep thoughts and feelings. For the rest of the
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world
, there is a loss of diversity. Along with the
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language
, a whole culture and way of expressing this culture
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
die
. Things of deep human value that could
be expressed
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before
are
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now
silenced.
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IELTS essay here are thousands of languages in the world today. Some of them are strong languages spoken by many millions of people, while others are spoken by smaller groups of people, sometimes numbering in the hundreds. As languages die, benefits accrue to human society, but also drawbacks. It is certainly not advantageous for everybody everywhere.

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