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Write an essay of about 250 words to express your opinion on the following topic. Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.1

Write an essay of about 250 words to express your opinion on the following topic. Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. v. 1
History is now an indispensable subject among the teaching curriculum. However, a number of people still have a strong belief that learning about the historical period leads to no benefits for those living in this modern era. In my judgment, this statement is totally no merit by dint of several following reasons. In the modern, it cannot be denied that examining the past would be incredibly valuable in terms of getting people to fully understand their ancestors and themselves at present. Initially, studying history helps young people be well-informed with the origin of their culture, which gives us the identity, a sense of roots and belongings. They then are likely to use the obtained knowledge about the national past to promote it to foreign countries’ citizens and vice versa. This will lead to an understanding of other nations’ tradition and the nurtured relationship between the two countries. Secondly, through history, people can know what their forefathers experienced and suffered from in the past. It is essential for all people in the distant past, present and the future to never forget such events in order to honor the efforts made by the ancestors for contribution to the peaceful world nowadays. To illustrate, the great Vietnam War is a compulsory component in the history curriculum in Vietnam to teach the kids to memorize such magnificent era of the Vietnamese in struggle for freedom. It is also visible that learning about the past brings about a variety of advantages. First and foremost, studying history can have some positive effects on the human’s health. By learning about the lifestyle of our ancestors like how they hunted, planted seeds and ate, the scientist could predict some diseases that modern people are facing. Some diseases might be genetically carried from the blood of our ancestors due to their nomadic lifestyles, and people could some research on how to cure these diseases. Additionally, knowing about the historical events may get people to understand the tendency of changing and revolutionizing of every culture. With that statistics of patterns, people will then be able to predict what the world will transform into in the distant future. The authorities can use the data for the preparation of acts against climate changes or wars, to clarify. To recap, learning about the past in an absolute importance to the whole community. It helps people to know what are the roots of their national culture to be proud and It also brings innumerable advantageous effect on people in this modern era.
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History
is
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now
an indispensable subject among the teaching curriculum.
However
, a number of
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people
still
have a strong belief that
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learning
about the historical period leads to no benefits for those living in this
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modern
era. In my judgment, this statement is
totally
no merit by dint of several following reasons.

In the
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modern
, it cannot
be denied
that examining the
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past
would be
incredibly
valuable in terms of getting
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people
to
fully
understand their
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ancestors
and themselves at present.
Initially
, studying
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history
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
young
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people
be well-informed with the origin of their culture, which gives us the identity, a sense of roots and belongings. They then are likely to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the obtained knowledge about the national
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past
to promote it to foreign countries’ citizens and vice versa. This will lead to an understanding of other nations’ tradition and the nurtured relationship between the two countries.
Secondly
, through
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history
,
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people
can know what their forefathers experienced and suffered from in the
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past
. It is essential for all
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people
in the distant
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past
, present and the future to never forget such
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events
in order to honor the efforts made by the
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ancestors
for contribution to the peaceful world nowadays. To illustrate, the great Vietnam War is a compulsory component in the
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history
curriculum in Vietnam to teach the kids to memorize such magnificent era of the Vietnamese in struggle for freedom.

It is
also
visible that
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learning
about the
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past
brings about a variety of advantages.
First
and foremost, studying
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history
can have
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some
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positive
effects on the human’s health. By
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learning
about the lifestyle of our
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ancestors
like how they hunted, planted seeds and ate, the scientist could predict
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some
diseases that
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modern
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people
are facing.
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Some
diseases might be
genetically
carried from the blood of our
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ancestors
due to their nomadic lifestyles, and
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people
could
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some
research on how to cure these diseases.
Additionally
, knowing about the historical
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events
may
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get
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people
to understand the tendency of changing and revolutionizing of every culture. With that statistics of patterns,
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people
will then be able to predict what the world will transform into in the distant future. The authorities can
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use
the data for the preparation of acts against climate
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changes
or wars, to clarify.

To recap,
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learning
about the
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past
in an absolute importance to the whole community. It
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helps
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people
to know what are the roots of their national culture to be proud and It
also
brings innumerable advantageous effect on
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people
in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
modern
era.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Write an essay of about 250 words to express your opinion on the following topic. Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
418 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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