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Write an essay of 180-250 words about the pros and cons of studying online .

Write an essay of 180-250 words about the pros and cons of studying online. DqpX6
In recent years, virut corona appear. Education is at the receiving end of the effect. To prevent the spead of this disease, the education department decided let student study online. This way also have pros and cons. Study online make use of extensive multimedia capabilities. A lot of lecturers use videos and other forms of media to discuss the subject matter, thereby enhancing the learning experience. It make both teacher and student can approach to the course easier. Study online allevivates pressure for teacher and student when they teach and study at home, at somewhere they feel comfortable. In addition, this new process is more time-saving to move. On the other hand, study online make student distracted by social media, limited interperability with teacher. Teacher waste a lot of time to learn about the medium of instruction. They can’t hold student in leash as study offline. Sometimes it hard to study because of distable of the internet access. To sum up, study online have advantage and disadvantage. Even thoung it may be a better choice but it can replace study offline. i personally belive that it is the best way to study when disease is taking place.
In recent years,
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virut
corona appear. Education is at the receiving
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end
of the effect. To
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prevent
the
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spead
of this disease, the education department decided
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let
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student
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study
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online
. This way
also
have pros and cons.

Study
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online
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make
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use
of extensive multimedia capabilities.
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A lot of
lecturers
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use
videos and other forms of media to discuss the
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subject matter
, thereby enhancing the learning experience. It
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make
both
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teacher
and
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student
can approach to the course easier.
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Study
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online
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allevivates
pressure for
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teacher
and
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student
when they teach and
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study
at home, at somewhere they feel comfortable.
In addition
, this new process is more time-saving to
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move
.

On the other hand
,
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study
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online
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make
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student
distracted by social media, limited
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interperability
with
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teacher
.
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waste
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a lot of
time to learn about the medium of instruction. They can’t hold
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student
in leash as
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study
offline.
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Sometimes
it
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hard
to
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study
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because
of
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distable
of the internet access.

To sum up,
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study
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online
have advantage and disadvantage. Even
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thoung
it may be a better choice
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but
it can replace
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study
offline.
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i
personally
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belive
that it is the best way to
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study
when disease is taking place.
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IELTS essay Write an essay of 180-250 words about the pros and cons of studying online.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
197 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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