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Write an essay describing a place in your country and explaining why it is worth visiting.

Write an essay describing a place in your country and explaining why it is worth visiting. bOVYB
Hue city has a history of thousands of generations which was recognized as a World Cultural Heritage by UNESCO. It is a place that keeps many historical, cultural relics and many beautiful landscapes. Every year, Hue city grabs the attention of millions of tourists not only by the peaceful and ancient beauty but also by its tenderness of melodies and romantic poems. Located in the center of Thua Thien Hue province, Hue city stretches along the Huong River. The city has an area of 265. 99 kilometers square, includes a complex of temples, pagodas, monuments, forests, and beautiful beaches. This city has potential tourism development in many aspects measuring up to any famous places. Hue people have made the harsh tropical monsoon climate here become a characteristic, and now, the rainy season in Hue is also beautiful and intriguing reflecting the special characteristic of its weather Anyone who has ever been in Hue always retains in their heart the quiet beauty of Hue; Hue in their heart is gentle, charming, and poetic. As the afternoon sunlight falls on the horizon, tourists hearken Hue's verses on Huong river and feel the enchanting beauty that instills in their minds. Hue is also famous for its diverse cuisine. It creates special flavors of hue’s food by the combination of talent skills of local people. What attracts many tourists who want to deepen their ties with Vietnamese traditional cuisine is the enthusiasm of Hue people for each dish. Hue city is as lovely as a muse located next to the bustling city. Hue city is the ideal destination for tourists having a passion to discover the ancient beauty of Vietnam
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Hue
city has a history of thousands of generations which
was recognized
as a World Cultural Heritage by UNESCO. It is a place that
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keeps
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historical, cultural relics and
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many
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beautiful
landscapes. Every year,
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Hue
city grabs the attention of millions of
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tourists
not
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only
by the peaceful and ancient
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beauty
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but
also
by its tenderness of melodies and romantic poems.

Located in the center of
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Thua
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Thien
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province,
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city stretches along the
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River. The city has an area of 265. 99 kilometers square, includes a complex of temples, pagodas, monuments, forests, and
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beautiful
beaches. This city has potential tourism development in
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many
aspects measuring up to any
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famous
places.
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Hue
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people
have made the harsh tropical monsoon climate here become a characteristic, and
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now
, the rainy season in
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Hue
is
also
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beautiful
and intriguing reflecting the special characteristic of its
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weather


Anyone who has ever been in
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Hue
always retains in their heart the quiet
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beauty
of
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Hue
;
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Hue
in their heart is gentle, charming, and poetic. As the afternoon sunlight falls on the horizon,
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tourists
hearken Hue's verses on
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Huong
river and feel the enchanting
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beauty
that instills in their minds.
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Hue
is
also
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famous
for its diverse cuisine. It creates special flavors of
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hue’s
food by the combination of talent
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skills
of local
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people
. What attracts
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many
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tourists
who want to deepen their ties with Vietnamese traditional cuisine is the enthusiasm of
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Hue
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people
for each dish.

Hue city is as lovely as a muse located
next
to the bustling city.
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Hue
city is the ideal destination for
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tourists
having a passion to discover the ancient
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beauty
of
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Vietnam
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IELTS essay Write an essay describing a place in your country and explaining why it is worth visiting.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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