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“Today, millions of people worldwide riding bicycles for transportation, enjoyment, sport, and exercise.” Describe examples of each of these uses.

“Today, millions of people worldwide riding bicycles for transportation, enjoyment, sport, and exercise. ” Describe examples of each of these uses. 3gmAd
Appeared since the 1800s, bicycles after many repairs and improvements, have become very popular with people of all ages. It is known to be a useful vehicle and is used by millions of people. Today, bicycles have been worldwide used in many fields such as transportation, entertainment, sports, and exercise. About 50 percent of the world’s population know how to ride a bicycle and according to UN Environment’s Global Report on walking and cycling, up to 60 percent of city trips are made by bike in Chinese cities in 2016(Leszek J. Sebulsky, C. n. d. ). This indicates that cycling has become extremely popular with humans. Cycling is chosen by many workers to move and travel which is often the fastest, most flexible way of getting around cities. It is still the major mode of transportation for people in many countries and it is being encouraged to replace other means of transportation (Leszek J. Sibilski, C. n. d. ). Besides, cycling is also a way to reduce emissions and protect the environment, it also helps users reduce travel costs and other fees. Not only that, but cycling is also fun and brings many benefits. It is a way to relax, entertain, and an opportunity for people to bond with each other. Cycling is like any other recreational activity, it is fun, takes you to recent places, and lifts your spirits. People create many competitions, cycling games as a way of light entertainment and full of connection; moreover, they also donate bicycles to encourage cycling to protect the environment, donate bicycles to support poor children. Cycling is a healthy sport that helps improve human health; it covers many sports like road cycling, cyclocross, mountain biking, cross-country, and so on… Sports tournaments including cycling competitions attract the attention of many people. Cycling is a healthy, low-impact exercise that can be enjoyed by people of all ages. it is easy, it does not require elevated levels of physical skill. riding a bicycle can help people decrease stress levels, prevent the risk of bone diseases, reduce cardiovascular diseases, and improve physical fitness. Without a doubt, cycling is especially useful and suitable for people, bicycles are being encouraged to use more to protect the environment as well as bring a healthy life.
Appeared since the 1800s,
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bicycles
after
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many
repairs and improvements, have become
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very
popular with
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people
of all ages. It
is known
to be a useful vehicle and is
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used
by millions of
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people
.
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Today
,
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bicycles
have been worldwide
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used
in
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many
fields such as transportation, entertainment,
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sports
, and exercise.

About 50 percent of the world’s population know how to ride a
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bicycle
and according to UN
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Environment’s
Global Report on walking and
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cycling
, up to 60 percent of city trips
are made
by bike in Chinese cities in 2016(
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Leszek
J.
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Sebulsky
, C. n. d.
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)
. This indicates that
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cycling
has become
extremely
popular with humans.
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Cycling
is chosen
by
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many
workers to
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move
and travel which is
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often
the fastest, most flexible way of getting around cities. It is
still
the major mode of transportation for
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people
in
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many
countries and it is
being encouraged
to replace
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other
means of transportation (
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Leszek
J.
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Sibilski
, C. n. d.
Loose punctuation mark.
)
.
Besides
,
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cycling
is
also
a way to
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reduce
emissions and protect the
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environment
, it
also
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helps
users
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reduce
travel costs and
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other
fees.

Not
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only
that,
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but
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cycling
is
also
fun and brings
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many
benefits. It is a way to relax, entertain, and an opportunity for
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people
to bond with each
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other
.
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Cycling
is like any
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other
recreational activity, it is fun, takes you to recent places, and lifts your spirits.
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People
create
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many
competitions,
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cycling
games as a way of light entertainment and full of connection;
moreover
, they
also
donate
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bicycles
to encourage
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cycling
to protect the
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environment
, donate
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bicycles
to support poor children.

Cycling is a healthy
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sport
that
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helps
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improve
human health; it covers
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many
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sports
like road
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cycling
, cyclocross, mountain biking, cross-country, and
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so
on…
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Sports
tournaments including
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cycling
competitions attract the attention of
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many
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people
.
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Cycling
is a healthy, low-impact exercise that can
be enjoyed
by
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people
of all ages.
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it
is easy, it does not require elevated levels of physical
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skill
.
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riding
a
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bicycle
can
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help
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people
decrease
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stress
levels,
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prevent
the
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risk
of bone diseases,
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reduce
cardiovascular diseases, and
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improve
physical fitness.

Without a doubt,
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cycling
is
especially
useful and suitable for
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people
,
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bicycles
are
being encouraged
to
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use
more to protect the
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environment
as well
as bring a healthy life.
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IELTS essay “Today, millions of people worldwide riding bicycles for transportation, enjoyment, sport, and exercise. ” Describe examples of each of these uses.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
377 words
5.5
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