Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Write an essay at least 700 words at most 1,000 words about yourseft

Write an essay at least 700 words at most 1, 000 words about yourseft 2RXYA
In recent years, tourism has boomed on an unprecedented scale, with many developing countries seeing it as a major source of income. But in recent years, tourism has been in crisis because of the epidemic. I am currently a student in hospitality management, a major that is also being greatly affected by the epidemic. This pandemic is having a huge impact on me, my family, and the industry of tourism. My parents are farmers. They grow and sell the crops they grow, but now it's very difficult to market those products. My brother and sister still have to continue to work in danger. I have to study online with instructors via laptop, but thanks to that, I am at home with my family and have the opportunity to do the things I want to do. I like listening to music in my free time. I feel completely relaxed when listening to ballad songs. Actually, music can heal my soul. After finishing my homework or when I am stressed or tired, I regularly spend a lot of time listening to music. In spite of the fact that we study at home, sometimes we still feel stressed and tired because we have to sit for a long time to study, so just listen to a song. It will help you relax and comfort immediately. I enjoy traveling as well as listening to music. For our family vacations, we head to Vung Tau, a prominent tourist area. But this year, Covid-19 made me call off that travel. So I utilize that time to practice my English because my profession entails a lot of interactions with foreigners. I started when I was in third grade, but I'm not interested in it anymore. Now I'm starting to realize how vital English is to me. It will help me acquire a decent career in the future and will dramatically transform my life. I enjoy listening to US-UK music because it helps me develop my listening abilities as well as my vocabulary by introducing me to many new terms. When that, I wrote all of the vocabularies on flashcards, which I will review after I get up and before I go to bed. Watching movies is another approach to improve your English skills. Movies that I frequently rewatch, such as Harry Potter and Family, are examples of this. That way, we may take notes on new words and study how the characters in the movie pronounce them. Furthermore, we may practice speaking like the characters in the film, which is a great approach for me to enhance my communication skills. In such situations, we will grow more sensitive and flexible.
In recent years, tourism has boomed on an unprecedented scale, with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developing countries
seeing it as a major source of income.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
in recent years, tourism has been in crisis
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the epidemic. I am
currently
a student in hospitality management, a major
that is
also
being
greatly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
by the epidemic. This pandemic is having a huge impact on me, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
, and the industry of tourism. My parents are farmers. They grow and sell the crops they grow,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
it's
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult to market those products. My brother and sister
still
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
continue to work in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
danger
. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
online with instructors via laptop,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
thanks to that, I am at home with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
and have the opportunity to do the things I want to do. I like listening to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
in my free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
feel completely relaxed when listening to ballad songs. Actually,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
can heal my soul. After finishing my homework or when I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stressed
or tired, I
regularly
spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
listening to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
In spite of
the fact that we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
at home,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
we
still
feel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stressed
and tired
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
sit for a long
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
listen to a song. It will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you relax and comfort immediately. I enjoy traveling
as well
as listening to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
. For our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
vacations, we head to
Possible spelling mistake found.
Vung
Tau, a prominent tourist area.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
this year, Covid-19 made me call off that travel.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I utilize that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to practice my English
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
my profession entails
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
interactions with foreigners. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
when I was in third grade,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I'm not interested in it anymore.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I'm starting to realize how vital English is to me. It will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me acquire a decent career in the future and will
dramatically
transform my life. I enjoy listening to US-UK
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me develop my listening abilities
as well
as my vocabulary by introducing me to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
new terms. When that, I wrote
Consider using "all the".
all of the
vocabularies on flashcards, which I will review after I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
up and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
I go to bed. Watching movies is another approach to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
your English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. Movies that I
frequently
Possible spelling mistake found.
rewatch
, such as Harry Potter and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Family
, are examples of this. That way, we may take notes on new words and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
how the characters in the movie pronounce them.
Furthermore
, we may practice speaking like the characters in the film, which is a great approach for me to enhance my communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. In such situations, we will grow more sensitive and flexible.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Write an essay at least 700 words at most 1, 000 words about yourseft

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
443 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts