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about your hometown/home city or the city you are living now.

about your hometown/home city or the city you are living now. 2R8QM
Bac Giang is the place where I was born and grew up with me. It is a province in the northeast region of Vietnam. Speaking of Bac Giang, Speaking of Bac Giang, it is impossible not to mention the beautiful natural landscapes such as: Suoi Mo scenic spot (Southern district); Cam Son lake, Khuon Than lake (Luc Ngan district), . . . Moreover, every year, Bac Giang has more than 500 traditional festivals held; Some typical festivals such as: Yen The Festival, Xuong Giang Festival, . . Bac Giang people are very friendly, honest, hospitable, . . . There are also many delicious dishes that we should try such as Luc Ngan lychee, Tho Ha rice paper. Here, people use personal transportation to go to school, work, etc. , and traffic jams are not common here. The fresh air and beauty of the hills interspersed with the plains is what I like most about them. Come to Bac Giang to experience the landscape as well as the people here.
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IELTS essay about your hometown/home city or the city you are living now.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
169 words
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