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write an essay at least 200 words about nomadic life

write an essay at least 200 words about nomadic life R2ldW

Nomadic life is very diffirent from our nomal life. When we live in the convenient life they are explore. To begin with what nomad means? Nomad means people who don not have permanent accomodation, enjoy the feelling of freedom. They always hunt, gather, sell, … They usually leave in tundra and sand, …Nomad need to hunt animals and gather plants to eat. They breed animals to self-supply food. Nomad regard share hospitality as something is very scared. So when someone visit their house, they will offer a cup of tea, milk, … Nomad people usually move for 4 to 6 times each year. In the summer, they live in a traditional circular tent. They spent almost time remaining to live in wooden or stone house, without electricity or water. Their diet primarily meat, poducts made from milk and very few vegetables. In the summer, children and women usually milk the cows. They convert them into something to eat or storage such as cheese, butter, sour cream, … fleece and goat hair is the common goods in Mongolia. They ogarnize wedding outdoor to enjoy the fresh air and some tents around serve food for guest. In the traditional wedding, 2 competition are horse racing and wrestling will take place. They are respected in their cultual. The wrestler wears traditional blue clothes. They introduce about themselves in front of the crowd. Two wrestlers bend down and hold other shoulder. When the referee give signal they will begin. That is all about the nomadic life. It appear that, each other will have their own view and nomadic life or normal life will have advantages and disadvantages. Live in the nomal life has good life condition, convenient. But if you choose nomadic life you can explore and study a newthing. “Travel broadens the mind”

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life
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.

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accomodation
, enjoy the Possible spelling mistake found.feelingfellingfeel lingfuelling
feelling
 of freedom. They always hunt, gather, sell, … They usually
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leave
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Nomad
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very
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visit
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house
, they will offer a cup of tea, milk, … You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvagabondpilgrimwanderermigrant
Nomad
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 for 4 to 6 times each year. In the summer, they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 in a traditional circular tent. They spent almost time remaining to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 in wooden or stone This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, without electricity or water. Their diet primarily
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poducts
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very
 few vegetables. In the summer, children and women usually
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goods
 in Mongolia. They Possible spelling mistake found.organize
ogarnize
 wedding outdoor to enjoy the fresh air and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 tents around serve food for guest. In the traditional wedding, 2 competition are horse racing and wrestling will take place. They are respected
 in their Possible spelling mistake found.cultural
cultual
. The wrestler wears traditional blue clothes. They introduce about themselves in front of the crowd. Two wrestlers bend down and hold other shoulder. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 the referee give signal they will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
. That is
 all about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperipateticwanderingpastoral
nomadic
 life.

It Did you mean "appears"?appears
appear
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own
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nomadic
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life
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life
 will have advantages and disadvantages. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
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nomal
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life
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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life
 condition, convenient. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 if you choose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperipateticwanderingpastoral
nomadic
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life
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newthing
. “Travel broadens the mind”