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The flowchart below shows the required course of action of Emergency Response Management Team (ERMT) in case of an incident.

The flowchart below shows the required course of action of Emergency Response Management Team (ERMT) in case of an incident. rYexl
The flowchart illustrates the information about the required course of action of the Emergency Response Management Team(ERMT) in case of any incident. Overall, it is evident that the incident is divided into two separate parts either in No or in YES. Once, the incident occurs the initial step is to inform the ERMT and tell them about the incident that happened. After that, ERMT will check whether the incident occurs with employees or with the assets. If YES then ERMT has to take emergency response as well as it puts on standby. And also the team has to take some actions like evacuation or shelter in place. Otherwise, the team will be on standby. After the first check should ERMT declare a disaster? If YES then the team will have to carry out recovery and will have to return to normal steps. On the other side, they will operate it normally.
The flowchart illustrates the information about the required course of action of the Emergency Response Management Team(
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ERMT
) in case of any
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incident
.
Overall
, it is evident that the
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incident
is divided
into two separate parts either in
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No
or in YES.

Once, the
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incident
occurs the initial step is to inform the
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ERMT
and
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tell
them about the
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incident
that happened. After that,
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ERMT
will
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check
whether the
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incident
occurs with employees or with the assets. If YES then
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ERMT
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has to
take emergency response
as well
as it puts on standby. And
also
the team
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has to
take
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some
actions like evacuation or shelter in place.
Otherwise
, the team will be on standby.

After the
first
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check
should
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ERMT
declare a disaster? If YES then the team will
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have to
carry out recovery and will
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have to
return to normal steps. On the other side, they will operate it
normally
.

IELTS essay The flowchart below shows the required course of action of Emergency Response Management Team (ERMT) in case of an incident.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
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4.0
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