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Write an essay about capital punishments, do you think capital punishment is compulsory to decrease the crime ratio or there should be any other way out for the same.

Write an essay about capital punishments, do you think capital punishment is compulsory to decrease the crime ratio or there should be any other way out for the same. mXBm1
Nowadays crime ratio is increasing day by day. Some believe that capital punishment should be must for the criminals. But, few argue that it is not the best solution. Meanwhile, I completely agree that capital punishment should be must for certain crimes. In this rapidly growing 21st century crime is also flourishing at the same pace. The reason can be various for increasing crime ratio poverty illiteracy. The government and administration are also going one step ahead by making rules more and more stringent. Capital punishment is also must because brutality in crimes is also increasing. Criminals and terrorists expanding their networks and destroying the nation from inside. We have seen a rapid increase in cases of rapes in the capital. Rules being stringent though, such crimes are taking place leading to misbalance in society. To take an example of Nirbhaya tragedy in which 16 year old girl was vandalised and brutally beaten and raped on a moving bus and then was thrown on the streets. The girl was not aware that night is going to be her last night in this world. This case shakes society as well as government and administration equally. Various cities were on curfew and people were demanding justice for Nirbhaya. The bench of 4 supreme court judges gave order of capital punishment for the culprits. Such brutal crimes not only harm victim but they also have equal effects on society as well. People do not feel safe at the same time there were restrictions on the women to go out during night for the purpose of safety. India being the youngest country in the world. Hence, taking freedom of men or women is not the solution. Several examples of terrorism have been reported which led to massive damage to nation, to take in control such unethical activities capital punishment is the only solution. It does not mean that each and every criminal has to be given capital punishment. But, there should be strict punishment in cases of rape, murder, terrorism. So, as to set an example for unsocial beings and also to gain trust of people. So that they can rely for their safety on government and administration.
Nowadays
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ratio is increasing day by day.
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believe that
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capital
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punishment
should be
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must
for the criminals.
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But
, few argue that it is not the best solution. Meanwhile, I completely
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agree
that
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capital
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punishment
should be
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must
for certain crimes.

In this
rapidly
growing 21st century
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crime
is
also
flourishing at the same pace. The reason can be various for increasing
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crime
ratio poverty illiteracy. The
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government
and administration are
also
going one step ahead by making
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rules
more and more stringent.

Capital
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punishment
is
also
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must
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because
brutality in
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crimes
is
also
increasing. Criminals and terrorists expanding their networks and destroying the nation from inside. We have
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seen
a rapid increase in cases of rapes in the
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capital
.
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Rules
being stringent though, such
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crimes
are taking place leading to
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misbalance
in society. To take an example of
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Nirbhaya
tragedy in which 16 year
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old
girl was
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vandalised
and
brutally
beaten and raped on a moving bus and then
was thrown
on the streets. The girl was not aware that night is going to be her last night in this world. This case shakes society
as well
as
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government
and administration
equally
. Various cities were on curfew and
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people
were demanding justice for
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Nirbhaya
. The bench of 4 supreme court judges gave order of
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capital
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punishment
for the culprits. Such brutal
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crimes
not
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only
harm victim
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but
they
also
have equal effects on society
as well
.
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People
do not feel safe at the same time there were restrictions on the women to go out during night for the purpose of safety. India being the youngest country in the world.
Hence
, taking freedom of
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men
or women is not the solution.

Several examples of terrorism have
been reported
which led to massive damage to nation, to take in control such unethical activities
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capital
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punishment
is the
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only
solution.

It does not mean that each and every criminal
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has to
be
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given
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capital
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punishment
.
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But
, there should be strict
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punishment
in cases of rape, murder, terrorism.
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So
, as to set an example for unsocial beings and
also
to gain trust of
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people
.
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So
that they can rely for their safety on
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government
and administration.
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IELTS essay Write an essay about capital punishments, do you think capital punishment is compulsory to decrease the crime ratio or there should be any other way out for the same.

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