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Write an email to HR requesting a new employee be hired to join your team.

Write an email to HR requesting a new employee be hired to join your team. 9lEV7

Hi Joy, Hope you are well. We have a need for a new Designer on our team. As you may know, we have a very large project for the next two years, and our team is too small. The duties of this Designer would include helping out the Senior Designers in all of their work, talking with suppliers, and attending regular sheduling meetings. One of the Designer's main responsibilities would be to make sure the project stays on track. Whereas the Senior Designers are focused on the main product, the new Designer would be designing some of the smaller parts of the product offering. And while we already have four designers on the team, we do need extra help. If possible we would need this person in place before the end of the summer. All the best, Jennifer

Hi Joy,

Hope you are well.

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.

Whereas the Senior You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinventorplannerproducerauthorarchitectengineer
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 on the main product, the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinventorplannerproducerauthorarchitectengineer
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 of the summer.

All the best,

Jennifer