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A lot of choose or not? Agree or disagree?

A lot of choose or not? Agree or disagree? m9gyK
It is commonly believed that. Now adays, the number of options have been increased in all aspects of life. I am completely agreed with this statement, and I will discuss about my point. My opinions. As you know, That technology have been guru. After industrial revolution. So, the lives have been changed, and individuals have more options in leaving. Nevertheless, there are many carriers, which can be chosen by people. While in last century. the jobs that are limited. Yet, a lot of carriers have been established, because of why did necessities. Although there were not jobs such as engineering at last decades. Today, youth can decide vast diversity of fields. In addition, about life quality people have better and more options than before. In transportations recreate creations, food, and people, and so on. People have a lot of options or choosing. They have led to. They have led to better life and high life satisfactory. To be more precise in past period individuelles used to use livestock for movement while today, they have a lot of options, not only transportation, have been more variety, but also they have became more safer and faster than before. As for food and nutrition. Nutrition is latricia industries have been developed, noticeably. In addition, the quality and diversity of foods and meals have been grew. As a result, we have a wide range of food, while the diversity was limited in past due to these facts. Today, life is more pleasant than before. To sum up, in my point of view, the number of options in all aspects of life have been gone up, apparently. So life is more enjoyable than before, and quality of life has been increased recently.
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commonly
believed that.
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adays
, the number of
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options
have
been increased
in all aspects of
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life
. I am completely
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agreed
with this statement, and I will
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discuss about my
point. My opinions. As you know, That technology have been guru. After industrial revolution.
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, the
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lives
have been
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changed
, and individuals have more
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options
in leaving.
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, there are
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many
carriers, which can
be chosen
by
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people
. While in last century.

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jobs that
are limited
.
Yet
,
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carriers have
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of why did necessities. Although there were not jobs such as engineering at last decades.
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Today
, youth can decide vast diversity of fields.
In addition
, about
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life
quality
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people
have better and more
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options
than
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before
. In transportations recreate creations,
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food
, and
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people
, and
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on.
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have
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options
or choosing. They have led to. They have led to better
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and high
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satisfactory. To be more precise in past period
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individuelles
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used
to
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livestock for movement while
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today
, they have
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a lot of
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options
, not
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transportation, have been more variety,
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also
they have
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became
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more safer
and faster than
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. As for
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and nutrition. Nutrition is
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latricia
industries have
been developed
,
noticeably
.
In addition
, the quality and diversity of
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foods
and meals have been
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grew
.
As a result
, we have a wide range of
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food
, while the diversity
was limited
in past due to these facts.
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Today
,
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life
is more pleasant than
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before
. To sum up, in my point of view, the number of
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options
in all aspects of
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life
have
been gone
up,
apparently
.
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So
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life
is more enjoyable than
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before
, and quality of
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life
has
been increased
recently.
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IELTS essay A lot of choose or not? Agree or disagree?

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  American English
2 paragraphs
287 words
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