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An increasing number of developing country are expanding their tourist industry.

An increasing number of developing country are expanding their tourist industry. 1o6Mn
In the modern era, and upward numbers of expanding nation are enlarge their visitor manufacturing. Although this might be a prevalent conviction among some people that, I opine that, country are expanding their Traveller production for explore their Nation. I will decipher my view points on this topic. Going Itna fore school of thought, in developing Nation that built numerous of places to explore their territory. There is positive impact that employment Downfall by dint of individual have jobs and their small businesses in Traveller sites. A case in point, now a days developing territory are made for profit but also for exploring, and have a look towards that their Nations is gorgeous. In the recent survey which shows that developing nations are spend on travelers visit place and earn more by collecting taxes. Thus, this process plays a vital role in territory development. Secondly, visitors are spend money on travelling and visiting place these all goes in government funds. They help us to develop our nation. A case in point, economic growth Rises as visitor purchase foods, and do shopping from some famous brands. These brands have famous in international by dint of travelers purchase something and take it to their hometown these think increased demand and economic growth of nation. In Illustrator for this, in survey of Toronto University which shows that, if more Travellers are is it the nation the economic growth rise by this nation is also developed and profit. All in all crystal clear that, visitor increased economic growth and explore the nation. Donation youth also earn profit by providing facilities to travellers.
In the modern era, and upward numbers of expanding
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nation
are
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enlarge
their
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visitor
manufacturing. Although this might be a prevalent conviction among
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some
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people
that, I opine that, country are expanding their
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Traveller
production for explore their
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Nation
. I will decipher my view points on this topic. Going
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Itna
fore school of
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thought
, in developing
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Nation
that built numerous of places to explore their territory. There is
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positive
impact that employment Downfall by dint of individual have jobs and their
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small
businesses in
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Traveller
sites. A case in point,
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now a days
developing territory
are made
for profit
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but
also
for exploring, and have a look towards that their
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Nations
is gorgeous. In the recent survey which
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shows
that developing
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nations
are
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on travelers visit place and earn more by collecting taxes.
Thus
, this process plays a vital role in territory development.
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,
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visitors
are
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spend
money on travelling and visiting place these all goes in
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government
funds. They
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help
us to develop our
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nation
. A case in point,
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economic
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growth
Rises as
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visitor
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purchase
foods, and
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do shopping
from
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famous
brands. These brands have
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in international by dint of travelers
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purchase
something and take it to their hometown these
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think
increased demand and
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economic
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growth
of
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nation
. In Illustrator for this, in survey of Toronto University which
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shows
that, if more
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Travellers
are is it the
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nation
the
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economic
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growth
rise by this
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nation
is
also
developed and profit. All in all crystal
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clear
that,
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visitor
increased
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economic
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growth
and explore the
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. Donation youth
also
earn profit by providing facilities to
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travellers
.
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IELTS essay An increasing number of developing country are expanding their tourist industry.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
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