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write an email to council giving yours ideas for the awards evening.

write an email to council giving yours ideas for the awards evening. N8M9b

To - jane. fuller@adim. web From -john@hotmail. com Subject -Awarded Evening Hi, I have got you are email regarding annual awarded evening. I would like to suggest some ideas. You should invite Angeolu Centre `s manager for this award. Her name is miss Ummi Roa, She has started her career as a volunteer with few people. Now this centre has became famous in the society. Where women and their children come from various countries who are suffering domestic abuse. Centre helps them with their immigration matter and accommodation. We can celebrate this function in our community centre on Sunday of 27 June. We can arrange Dj for music also he is affordable person, we will invite public through to leaflet. Everyone will be allowed to bring food, drink and snacks. Consequently, we can tuck in different kinds of food. If we awarded miss Rao this going to be sigh up for who work for vulnerable people. For instance, who are still suffering from domestic violence they can get hope and knowledge from this event. Research shows that in lockdown 70% women have suffered from domestic violence. Due to the facts. We should invite her for annual awards. To conclude, I would like to say everyone should have appreciated these kind of person who work for us without getting any benefits.

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event
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