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There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the government should make tertiary education free for all students.

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the government should make tertiary education free for all students. N8Mx2
There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the government should make tertiary education free for all students. I tend to believe that higher education should be free for the following reason. The merits of outstanding free university education are apparent. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that many students cannot afford a university education, although they truly want to get degrees. Obviously, without enough financial resources, these students have to give up their dreams, which is unfair to them. Besides, the government is already wasting taxpayers’ money on projects such as space exploration by making spaceships. The fund should be spent on university education. That is to say, the government would be well-advised to allocate resources in a more sensible way. My belief is that high tuition fees may prevent some students from studying at university. It is widely recognized that many young people are reluctant to face their loans after graduation, which means such a burden might make university education less attractive. I admit that students’ financial contribution to higher education helps universities to improve facilities and environment it helps to convenient to study, which impact the result of student. Despite that, a more reasonable government fund allocation can solve this issue, for which we can find plenty of evidence from our own experience. In conclusion, I would argue that tertiary education should be paid for by the government. Accordingly, it would be generally advisable for the government to allocate financial resources in a more beneficial way.
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free for all
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. I tend to believe that higher
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should be free for the following reason.

The merits of outstanding free
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university
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education
are apparent. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that
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cannot afford a
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, although they
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financial resources, these
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students
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have to
give up their dreams, which is unfair to them.
Besides
, the
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is already wasting taxpayers’ money on projects such as space exploration by making spaceships. The fund should
be spent
on
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university
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education
.
That is
to say, the
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would be well-advised to allocate resources in a more sensible way. My belief is that high tuition fees may
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prevent
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some
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from studying at
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university
. It is
widely
recognized that
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young
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are reluctant to face their loans after graduation, which means such a burden might
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make
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university
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less attractive.

I admit that
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financial contribution to higher
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helps
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to
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improve
facilities and environment it
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study, which impact the result of
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student
. Despite that, a more reasonable
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government
fund allocation can solve this issue, for which we can find
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plenty
of evidence from our
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own
experience.

In conclusion
, I would argue that tertiary
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should
be paid
for by the
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.
Accordingly
, it would be
generally
advisable for the
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government
to allocate financial resources in a more beneficial way.
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IELTS essay There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the government should make tertiary education free for all students.

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