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There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the government should make tertiary education free for all students.

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the government should make tertiary education free for all students. N8Mx2

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the government should make tertiary education free for all students. I tend to believe that higher education should be free for the following reason. The merits of outstanding free university education are apparent. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that many students cannot afford a university education, although they truly want to get degrees. Obviously, without enough financial resources, these students have to give up their dreams, which is unfair to them. Besides, the government is already wasting taxpayers’ money on projects such as space exploration by making spaceships. The fund should be spent on university education. That is to say, the government would be well-advised to allocate resources in a more sensible way. My belief is that high tuition fees may prevent some students from studying at university. It is widely recognized that many young people are reluctant to face their loans after graduation, which means such a burden might make university education less attractive. I admit that students’ financial contribution to higher education helps universities to improve facilities and environment it helps to convenient to study, which impact the result of student. Despite that, a more reasonable government fund allocation can solve this issue, for which we can find plenty of evidence from our own experience. In conclusion, I would argue that tertiary education should be paid for by the government. Accordingly, it would be generally advisable for the government to allocate financial resources in a more beneficial way.

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