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Community service is a good way of giving

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Community service is a good way of giving back to the society we live in. Whether it should be a compulsory part of high school programs like charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children, some people believe that it should be offered as unpaid service. In my opinion, unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of the high school education system as it clearly possesses much more advantages than disadvantages. This Essay will address why the pros outweigh the cons in reference to the above topic. Firstly, free community service offered by high school students is likely to save the environment from hazardous materials that may pose a lot of risk to the community. When the environment is clean in affordable and achievable methods like free community service, the environment is therefore maintained in a friendly manner to avoid dangers like poorly disposed glass home accidents, injuries, and even blockages of sewer systems. The communities are likely to have a healthier living standard for all population age groups. Children play in a safe environment, people experience little in maintained of environment and healthcare spend close to no time in the management of communicable diseases like cholera brought by a splash of sewer contents. In addition, this will make sustainable environmental management a habit in society. For example, nearly all kinds of purchased goods are packaged in non-disposable plastic wastes, polythene papers which end up making the environment unfriendly when not properly segregated and safely disposed of. The school system will make sure all these threats are keenly identified and correctly disposed or recycled. This will also put a lot of sense in the students’ state of mind on the importance of correct disposal of household wastes creating a future with the right culture to maintain a clean environment.
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programs like charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children,
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some
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people
believe that it should
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service
should be a compulsory part of the high
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education system as it
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possesses much more advantages than disadvantages. This Essay will address why the pros outweigh the cons in reference to the above topic.

Firstly
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community
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offered by high
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school
students is likely to save the
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environment
from hazardous materials that may pose
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a lot of
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risk
to the
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community
. When the
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environment
is clean in affordable and achievable methods like free
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community
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service
, the
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environment
is
therefore
maintained
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disposed glass home accidents, injuries, and even blockages of sewer systems. The
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communities
are likely to have a healthier living standard for all population age groups. Children play in a safe
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environment
,
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people
experience
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little
in maintained of
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environment
and healthcare spend close to no time in the management of communicable diseases like cholera brought by a splash of sewer contents.

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, this will
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make
sustainable environmental management a habit in society.
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,
nearly
all kinds of
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purchased
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goods
are packaged
in non-disposable plastic wastes, polythene papers which
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end
up making the
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environment
unfriendly
when not
properly
segregated and
safely
disposed of. The
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school
system will
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make
sure all these threats are
keenly
identified and
correctly
disposed or recycled. This will
also
put
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a lot of
sense in the students’ state of mind on the importance of correct disposal of household wastes creating a future with the right culture to maintain a clean
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environment
.
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IELTS essay Community service is a good way of giving

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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