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I received your email. The
first
, I
think
you should find subjects is your strengths and what the jobs you want to do in the future. From there, you can define goals to strive for and study. You should
also
make
a study plan to understand the knowledge in the best way. In
many way
it can
help
you more. You know that, I will be talking the entrance exam to the high school
next
year. I plan to study at a high school for the
giflted
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IELTS essay Write an email to advised

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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