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Talk about yourself ( life , school , hobbies,...)

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I would like to talk about my school. Well, my school has name is Nguyen Van Troi secondary school. It's located on An Phu roundabout. As you know, it is very big with three buildings. Besides, the campus is beautiful and the classmates are friendly and supportive. Moreover, the teachers are highly professional. To be honest, I want to apply to good colleges so now I study very hard to get a good results
I would like to talk about my school. Well, my school has name is Nguyen Van
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Troi
secondary school. It's located on An
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roundabout. As you know, it is
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big
with three buildings.
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, the campus is
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beautiful
and the classmates are friendly and supportive.
Moreover
, the teachers are
highly
professional. To be honest, I want to apply to
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good
colleges
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so
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now
I study
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very
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to
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get
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good
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IELTS essay Talk about yourself ( life, school, hobbies, . . . )

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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