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The weird day out alone in the forest

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The faint wind moaned! With shedding body, sweaty nose and blank mind, I decented my steps over the green and brown aesthetic forest. The charcoal dark sky lit up with the flash of lightning. The heaven opened and bought a heavy downpour. The solid land transformed into soft and muddy land. Abruptly I saw a snail gliding over my muscular feet. I stifle my breath and slowly Shaked my leg, I felt a subtle annoying, then I heard a thud sound as the snail landed the floor.
The faint wind moaned! With shedding body, sweaty nose and blank mind, I
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decented
my steps over the green and brown aesthetic forest. The charcoal dark sky lit up with the flash of lightning. The heaven opened and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a heavy downpour.
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The
solid land transformed into soft and muddy land.
Abruptly
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
a snail gliding over my muscular feet. I stifle my breath and
slowly
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Shaked
my leg, I felt a subtle annoying, then I heard a thud sound as the snail landed the floor.

IELTS essay The weird day out alone in the forest

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
87 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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