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The weird day out alone in the forest

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The faint wind moaned! With shedding body, sweaty nose and blank mind, I decented my steps over the green and brown aesthetic forest. The charcoal dark sky lit up with the flash of lightning. The heaven opened and bought a heavy downpour. The solid land transformed into soft and muddy land. Abruptly I saw a snail gliding over my muscular feet. I stifle my breath and slowly Shaked my leg, I felt a subtle annoying, then I heard a thud sound as the snail landed the floor.

The faint wind moaned! With shedding body, sweaty nose and blank mind, I Possible spelling mistake found.dementeddecanted
decented
 my steps over the green and brown aesthetic forest. The charcoal dark sky lit up with the flash of lightning. The heaven opened and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a heavy downpour. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 solid land transformed into soft and muddy land. Abruptly
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a snail gliding over my muscular feet. I stifle my breath and slowly
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Shaked
 my leg, I felt a subtle annoying, then I heard a thud sound as the snail landed the floor. 