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WRITE AN ARTICLE OF 200 WORDS, PROPOSING SOME SOLUTIONS TO HELP THE POOR IN YOUR COMMUNITY.

WRITE AN ARTICLE OF 200 WORDS, PROPOSING SOME SOLUTIONS TO HELP THE POOR IN YOUR COMMUNITY. rGGMm
We’re all humans but never the same. Some people have so many things in life while others have barely enough just to survive. Poor people don’t have enough common objects like clothing, food, education, healthcare or even human rights that can also happen right in your community. In fact, we cannot decline poverty but we can help the poor with some effective solutions. First of all, fundraising or volunteering helps a lot when the poor needs emergency support. Engaging individuals, charitable foundations or governmental agencies will seek and gather voluntary financial contributions to give to needy people. And then, volunteers will do voluntarily any work that actively helps them like providing beverages, repairing falling houses, teaching emergency skills. . . Secondly, we can donate old belongings, groceries or eatables. Donating groceries will make the poor's full, stay healthy and work to earn money for a living. Donating clothes especially in the winter season when the weather is cold will help them avoid some sickness. As I can see, old but useful stuff can make someone's day. Last but not least, increased access to education can contribute to reducing poverty. Knowledge and consciousness can help the poor to stand on their feet, fight inequality and develop abilities. Therefore, they can have a better life, live happily and achieve success. In conclusion, helping poor people in our community is a long process and needs a lot of effort. There is no one true solution for all poor people but I believe that if we can give them a chance, they can themselves improve their problem. In addition, helping people is also a way to helping ourselves.
We’re all humans
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never the same.
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Some
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people
have
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so
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many
things in life while others have
barely
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enough
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just
to survive.
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Poor
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people
don’t have
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enough
common objects like clothing, food, education, healthcare or even human rights that can
also
happen right in your community. In fact, we cannot decline poverty
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but
we can
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help
the
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poor
with
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some
effective solutions.

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First of all
, fundraising or volunteering
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helps
a lot when the
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poor
needs emergency support. Engaging individuals, charitable foundations or governmental agencies will seek and gather voluntary financial contributions to give to needy
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people
. And then, volunteers will do
voluntarily
any work that
actively
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helps
them like providing beverages, repairing falling
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houses
, teaching emergency
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skills
.
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Secondly
, we can donate
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old
belongings, groceries or eatables. Donating groceries will
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make
the poor's full, stay healthy and work to earn money for a living. Donating clothes
especially
in
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the winter season
when the weather is
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cold
will
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help
them avoid
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some
sickness. As I can
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see
,
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old
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useful stuff can
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make
someone's day.

Last
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not least, increased access to education can contribute to reducing poverty. Knowledge and consciousness can
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help
the
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poor
to stand on their feet, fight inequality and develop abilities.
Therefore
, they can have a better life,
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live
happily
and achieve success.

In conclusion
, helping
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poor
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people
in our community is a long process and needs
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a lot of
effort. There is no one true solution for all
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poor
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people
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but
I believe that if we can give them a chance, they can themselves
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improve
their problem.
In addition
, helping
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people
is
also
a way to helping ourselves.
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IELTS essay WRITE AN ARTICLE OF 200 WORDS, PROPOSING SOME SOLUTIONS TO HELP THE POOR IN YOUR COMMUNITY.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
274 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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