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write about your today's events and what are you going to do.

write about your today's events and what are you going to do. gDJAl
Today, I will talk about something that I was about to do, but I did not. In other words, I would have do it, on the contrary, there were a plethora of complexities. Consequently, I do not what to say, today, I must have study harder and harder man prepare more for my next exam. However, I am going to travel to Kayseri to read about Rasail Alnur. I am somewhat conscious about the weather there, often the temperature is at the middle levels, so it will be great and there will be no need to air condition.
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Today
, I will talk about something that I was about to do,
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but
I did not.
In other words
, I would have
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do
it,
on the contrary
, there were a plethora of complexities.
Consequently
, I do not what to say,
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today
, I
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must
have study harder and harder
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man
prepare more for my
next
exam.
However
, I am going to travel to
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Kayseri
to read about
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Rasail
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Alnur
. I am somewhat conscious about the weather there,
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often
the temperature is at the middle levels,
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so
it will be great and there will be no need to air condition.
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IELTS essay write about your today's events and what are you going to do.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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