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Write about your favourite kind of music. Why do you like this music? How do you feel when you listen to this music?

Write about your favourite kind of music. Why do you like this music? How do you feel when you listen to this music? 1AKx7
As time passed, many genres of music were born in the world. So there are many kinds of music now. Personally, I think pop music is one of the most interesting genres and I love listening to it. First of all, lyrics, unlike rap or traditional music, are often too fast for people to understand or too slow for people to get bored. Pop music is written to a perfect and easy-to-listen rhythm. This helps me fully understand what the composer wants to convey, sometimes it suits my mood, sometimes it helps me fall asleep. In addition, pop music has a vibrant rhythm and rhythmic rhythm that helps me relax after a hard day at school. Whenever I'm lazy, I just listen to pop music, I feel like I've become very excited and do well. on the top of that, music is very important to my life
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pop
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music
is one of the most interesting genres and I
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listening to it.
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music
, are
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helps
me fall asleep.
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, pop
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music
has a vibrant rhythm and rhythmic rhythm that
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helps
me relax after a
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day at school. Whenever I'm lazy, I
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listen to pop
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, I feel like I've become
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excited and do well.
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IELTS essay Write about your favourite kind of music. Why do you like this music? How do you feel when you listen to this music?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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