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I have a dream about my job in the future, it's a doctor. I want to be a doctor because I want to heal and help people. I am inspired to love this job thanks to my mother. I often follow my mother to the hospital so I have seen a lot of scenes of her taking care of and helping people and she is also a person who is devoted to her work. At that time, I really admired him and wanted to become a doctor. Of course, being a doctor is not easy. It is a job that requires meticulousness and careful observation. My mother often said that the medical profession is very hard, but I believe that as long as there is enthusiasm, nothing is impossible. Although I know it will take a long time to study to become a doctor, I will never give up on my dream.

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doctor
. I want to be a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withphysicianexpertspecialistprofessorscientistsurgeon
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because
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help
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people
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love
 this job thanks to my mother. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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often
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so
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seen
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a lot of
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 a person who is devoted
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. Of course
, being a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withphysicianexpertspecialistprofessorscientistsurgeon
doctor
 is not easy. It is a job that requires meticulousness and careful observation. My mother This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 said that the medical profession is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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hard
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I believe that as long as there is enthusiasm, nothing is impossible. Although I know it will take a long time to study to become a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withphysicianexpertspecialistprofessorscientistsurgeon
doctor
, I will never give up on my dream. 