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agree or don't agree 'shopping in the malls better than shopping in markets'

agree or don't agree 'shopping in the malls better than shopping in markets' Nlrj0
shopping is very important in people's lives. People are different in their choices of things and they also have different feelings about those things. Some prefere markets shopping and some prefer malls shopping. From my point of view, shopping in the market is better than shopping in the malls. There are some reasons to support my view. First, malls have lots of small markets. Malls are modern thing in society. For example, Muscat mall which has lots of small markets like centerpoints and zara. Also it has lots of restaurants. Second, shopping in malls is easier because of less crowded. So, we finish shopping fast and we find all the things we need at the same place. Third, malls are open all the day. Go shooping any time we want. We are not limited to a specific time. To sum up, I agree that mall's shopping is beter than markets shopping. Ease of shopping and no crowding are the most important reasons.
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IELTS essay agree or don't agree 'shopping in the malls better than shopping in markets'

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
162 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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