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Nowadays sending children to boarding school becoming popular ?why? Is this a positive or negative development.

Nowadays sending children to boarding school becoming popular? why? Is this a positive or negative development. 5a6XD

In modernlized era, it is becoming popular to sending children to boarding school. The essay intends to delve into the reasons of this phenomenon. Although there are certain disadvantages, I consider that overall it is a negative development. There are plethora of reasons why mostly parents send their children to boarding school. The first and foremost is expenditures are increasing day by day, as inflation enhances dramatically. Therefore both persons have to work to fulfill their needs and desires. Because of this, they have no time for their children

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