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Everyone has a different sport they love. Huyen is my classmate. Her favorite sport is badminton. This is a pretty easy sport to play, but to play well you need enough practice. She usually plays badminton every morning. Usually, she plays with her dad. But if he’s busy, she’ll play with her brother. Playing badminton helped she train her fitness and it also helped her get closer to my family members. Playing badminton also helps her to lose fat for a firmer body. I thought that without badminton Huyen would feel very sad.
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with her dad.
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with her brother. Playing badminton
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IELTS essay write about your classmate's hobby

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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