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Complaint of cassette player to the manager of shop

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I am writing to complain about the cassette player that I bought from your shop last night. When I used it for the first time, it worked properly. Next time, when I put on it, its sound was extremely low and then it didn’t work. I felt regrettable. Although this cassette player was band new and costly, it didn’t fend to me that value I sent the cassette player back to your shop after having been assured by one of the assistants that I would be sent a refund. However, I still have not received one. As a regular customer of yours, I feel disappointed with the way I have been treated and hope that steps will be taken to rectify the situation
I am writing to complain about the cassette player that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
from your shop last night. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
it for the
first
time, it worked
properly
.
Next
time, when I put on it, its sound was
extremely
low and then it didn’t work. I felt regrettable. Although this cassette player was band new and costly, it didn’t fend to me that value I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
the cassette player back to your shop after having
been assured
by one of the assistants that I would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
a refund.
However
, I
still
have not received one. As a regular customer of yours, I feel disappointed with the way I have
been treated
and hope that steps will
be taken
to rectify the
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
situation
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IELTS essay Complaint of cassette player to the manager of shop

Essay
  American English
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122 words
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