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write about your bad habit and your plan to kick it

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One of my bad habits which I really want to kick is nail-biting. It has been happening since I was a kid. I often bite my nails when I am stressed, anxious or when I’m free and have nothing to do. Of course, this bad habit has a lot of disadvantages. It can do harm to my health, make my nails ugly and abnormal, etc. Because of those bad effects, I need to kick it. I can keep them short, cut it before it is long enough for me to bite it. I also can get a manicure or painting a coat of glossy paint. It will make my nails look so great and stop me bite it. Another solution I can try is always keeping my hands and mouth busy. I can talk, eat gum or hold something. With these plans, I hope I will get rid of nail-biting and take up some new good habits.
One of my
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habits which I
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bite my nails when I am
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stressed
, anxious or when I’m free and have nothing to do.
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bad
habit has
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a lot of
disadvantages. It can do harm to my health,
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make
my nails ugly and abnormal, etc.
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Because
of those
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bad
effects, I need to kick it. I can
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keep
them short,
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cut
it
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before
it is long
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enough
for me to bite it. I
also
can
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get
a manicure or painting a coat of glossy paint. It will
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make
my nails look
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so
great and
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stop
me bite it. Another solution I can try is always keeping my hands and mouth busy. I can talk, eat gum or hold something. With these plans, I hope I will
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get
rid of nail-biting and take up
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IELTS essay write about your bad habit and your plan to kick it

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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