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How selfish people effect on your life

How selfish people effect on your life BgraX
complacent people like wasps bite humans And seek their parole And in the face of events, they show their indifference They always like to nominate anywhere And keep everyone around them preoccupied And they don't let the multitude to be rehabilitated But they do not know that at the end when they departed this life. they are first kept in the morgue, which is the end of the destiny of all human beings, And then they enter their eternal home vertically These people should know that with these behaviors, their good name will not remain.
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complacent
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people
like wasps bite humans And seek their parole And in the face of
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events
, they
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show
their indifference They always like to nominate anywhere And
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keep
everyone around them preoccupied And they don't
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let
the multitude to
be rehabilitated
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But
they do not know that at the
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end
when they departed this life.
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they
are
first
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kept
in the morgue, which is the
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end
of the destiny of all human beings, And then they enter their eternal home
vertically
These
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people
should know that with these behaviors, their
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good
name will not remain.

IELTS essay How selfish people effect on your life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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