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In some cities all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. what are the causes and solutions..?

In some cities all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. what are the causes and solutions. . ? YdGyd
Private vehicles have been increasing enormously during last few decades which cause most threatening issue in cities. I will illustrate the reasons behind occuring traffic jams and possible solutions for it in this essay. occurring traffic has many reasons responsible. The main reason is Convenient and quickly mode of transportation as well as purchasing own car is status symbol in community. The second reason is less expanses of budget in transport infrastructure and public transportation system. As a result, the city is indequate to deal with high volume of traffic. In addition, less people in favour of use bus and metro services because of less reliable, insecure and inpunctual. In India, it is common that due to bad weather may affect the schedule of trains and buses. To takle this situation, it has several possible solutions. Authorities should more Investing in infrastructure to make overbridges and suburban rails and buses for improve the realiblity and efficiency. The next vital solution is banning car for certain times in day and encourage more people to use public mode in city centre or downtown area. In conclusion, it is clear that various reasons namely infrastructure and having own private car for causing traffic congestion, several steps require to tackle this problem.
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during last few decades which cause most threatening issue in cities. I will illustrate the
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jams and possible solutions for it in this essay.

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has
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responsible. The main
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is Convenient and
quickly
mode of transportation
as well
as purchasing
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own
car is status symbol in community. The second
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reason
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expanses of budget in transport infrastructure and public transportation system.
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, the city is
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indequate
to deal with high volume of
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bus and metro services
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of less reliable, insecure and
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inpunctual
. In India, it is common that due to
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weather may affect the schedule of trains and buses.

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this situation, it has several possible solutions. Authorities should more Investing in infrastructure to
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make
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overbridges
and suburban rails and buses for
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improve
the
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realiblity
and efficiency. The
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vital solution is banning car for certain times in day and encourage more
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public mode in city
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centre
or downtown area.

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, it is
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that various
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namely
infrastructure and having
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own
private car for causing
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traffic
congestion, several steps require to tackle this problem.
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IELTS essay In some cities all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. what are the causes and solutions. . ?

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