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The figures illustrate the change in the road that is used

The figures illustrate the change in the road that is used Ed0LQ

The figures illustrate the change in the road that is used to access the city hospital in 2007 and 2010. The details will be presented in the following paragraphs. Overall, it can be seen that the road had been developed throughout 2007 to 2010 period. There were several added facilities along the road. Initially, in 2007, the hospital road was surrounded by a number of bus stops, accessed from city road, the patients would see the car park for public and staff at the right-hand side. However, in 2010, the carpark was only for hospital staffs and the bus stations were centered on the left-hand side. Moreover, two roundabout was built at the entrance of the city hospital and at the city road. The hospital was always surrounded by ring road throughout the period given. Nevertheless, in 2010, the huge public car park was constructed to the east of the hospital, accessed easily form the ring road.

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change
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
that is
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used
 to access the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 in 2007 and 2010. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 will be presented
 in the following paragraphs.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 had been developed
 throughout 2007 to 2010 period. There were several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 facilities along the road.

Initially
, in 2007, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
was surrounded
 by a number of bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
, accessed from city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, the patients would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the car park for public and staff at the right-hand side. However
, in 2010, the Possible spelling mistake found.car parkcarp ark
carpark
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 staffs and the bus stations were centered
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand side. Moreover
, two roundabout was built
 at the entrance of the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 and at the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 was always surrounded by ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 throughout the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
. Nevertheless
, in 2010, the huge public car park was constructed
 to the east of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, accessed easily
 form the ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. 