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Write about why someone might be afraid of snakes.

Write about why someone might be afraid of snakes. m52y8

Afraid of wild animals is very common between everyone. In my opinion, the basic reason of this fear can be directly related to when we were child. I remember that when we were children, our parents used this fear to punish us when we did something wrong. For example, when I was a child and had a terrible mistake, my mother said I put you in front of a dog. Parents sometimes used the afraid of wild animals for learning. For example, to say that lying is a bad feature, they said if you say lie then the snake will bite you. Therefore, based on the above statement, the feeling of afraid of wild animals such as snake in most cases does not have a theoretical reason and just related to our background and feeling. When we grew up and searched about the wild animals such as snake, we found that this fear was very crazy and not all type of snakes are frighten.

Afraid of wild You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 common between everyone. In my opinion, the basic reason of this fear can be directly
 related to when we were child. I remember that when we were children, our parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 this fear to punish us when we did something This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. For example
, when I was a child and had a terrible mistake, my mother said I put you in front of a dog.

Parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
The phrase 'the afraid of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the afraid of
 wild You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 for learning. For example
, to say that lying is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 feature, they said if you say lie then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserpentvermin
snake
 will bite you.

Therefore
, based on the above statement, the feeling of afraid of wild You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 such as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserpentvermin
snake
in most cases
 does not have a theoretical reason and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 related to our background and feeling. When we grew up and searched about the wild You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 such as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserpentvermin
snake
, we found that this fear was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 crazy and not all type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserpentvermin
snakes
 are Consider using a past participle here: "frightened".frightened
frighten
. 