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To tell the brother who are in the University of medicine to come back home to help inearning

To tell the brother who are in the University of medicine to come back home to help inearning 8JQ15
How are you getting on with your lessons at the University of Medicine? I think you can manage to get through all the necessary exams as you are a bright person. Almost all lessons in medical textbooks are very easy to learn for you. I know that you passed the matriculation examination with flying colours. Also, you got high marks enough to easily get into the University of Medicine. My mother has told me that you are the top ten students in your class. I knew that the old questions in 2017 are too challenging for normal students to get any distinction. But you are such a smart student that you could sail through the exam. You are also an outstanding student in all subjects. Whenever I have the thought of you, I feel " How clever my brother is? Now I would like to ask you to help me in my learning. I am facing a few difficulties in almost all subjects. At the beginning of the academic year, it was so easy for me to memorize everything I learn. But the longer I continue learning, the more difficult I absorb the lessons. I can't easily work out the sums of both physics and mathematics. I found a lot of errors in writing definitions and laws of physics and chemistry. I got only average marks in all subjects in the pretest. This is the reason why I am asking for your help. I think I buried myself in using my mobile phone. I played online games and browsed through the facts that are not relevant to my studies. Moreover, I watched a lot of movies from applications such as Netflix, Prime Video, Fox and so on. Wasting much time like this made me lazy and unable to focus on my lessons. I realize that I need a supervisor who guides me on the best way of learning. So, please come back as soon as you have finished taking your examinations. I don't want to buckle down to my study in the last few months. I also need to pore over English, the most crucial subject. Besides, I would like to improve my English skill. I have decided that I going to continue learning the English language to take the IELTS test because I want to know my level in English. But if my level is so low, I will feel embarrassed about my result in the tests. I also love speaking English fluently. Your accent is like a native speaker because your pronunciation is very good. If you have any plan to visit somewhere after the exam, cancel it and come back home at once. I will treat you to an excellent Chinese restaurant in the downtown area as Chinese food is your favourite one.
How are you getting on with your
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lessons
at the University of Medicine? I
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think
you can manage to
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get
through all the necessary exams as you are a bright person. Almost all
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lessons
in medical textbooks are
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very
easy to learn for you. I know that you passed the matriculation examination with flying
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colours
.
Also
, you
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got
high marks
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enough
to
easily
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get
into the University of Medicine. My mother has
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told
me that you are the top ten
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students
in your
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class
. I knew that the
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old
questions in 2017 are too challenging for normal
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students
to
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get
any distinction.
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But
you are such a smart
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student
that you could sail through the exam. You are
also
an outstanding
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student
in all
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subjects
. Whenever I have the
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thought
of you, I feel
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"
How clever my brother is?
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Now
I would like to ask you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me in my
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learning
. I am facing a few difficulties in almost all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
. At the beginning of the academic year, it was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
easy for me to memorize everything I learn.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the longer I continue
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learning
, the more difficult I absorb the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lessons
. I can't
easily
work out the sums of both physics and mathematics. I found
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a lot of
errors in writing definitions and laws of physics and chemistry.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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got
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only
average marks in all
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subjects
in the pretest. This is the reason why I am asking for your
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help
. I
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think
I buried myself in using my mobile phone. I played online games and browsed through the facts that are not relevant to my studies.
Moreover
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
movies from applications such as Netflix, Prime Video, Fox and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on. Wasting much time like this made me lazy and unable to focus on my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lessons
. I realize that I need a supervisor who guides me on the best way of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
.
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So
,
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please
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come
back as
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soon
as you have finished taking your examinations. I don't want to buckle down to my study in the last few months. I
also
need to pore over English, the most crucial
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subject
.
Besides
, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
my English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
. I have decided that
Did you mean "I'm going", "I am going", or "I was going"?
I going
to continue
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learning
the English language to take the IELTS
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test
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because
I want to know my level in English.
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But
if my level is
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so
low, I will feel embarrassed about my result in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tests
. I
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
speaking English
fluently
. Your accent is like a native speaker
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because
your pronunciation is
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
. If you have any plan to visit somewhere after the exam, cancel it and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
back home at once. I will treat you to an excellent Chinese restaurant in the downtown area as Chinese food is your
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
one.
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IELTS essay To tell the brother who are in the University of medicine to come back home to help inearning

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
466 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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