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The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airport in new York City between 1995 and 2000. Write a report

The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airport in new York City between 1995 and 2000. Write a report g8Dd1

The bar graph provides the information of airport visitors in a million, who visited John F. Kennedy, LaGuardia, Newark airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. To begin with, 35 M. on crowd who inspect LaGuardia runway, and around 27 million family see John F. Kennedy installation. The least number of individual inspect Newark airfield in the beginning of the period at almost 16 million. After a period, the ratio of community who frequent three major airstrip were increased slightly. In 1997, this trend was growing the same. Moreover, the visitor proportion of John F. Kennedy airstrip had decreased in the next two years, which was just above 30 million nation in year 1999; whereas, LaGuardia airport visitor trend was increased. Interestingly, the proportion of visiting Newark airport was remained same in the last three year which was almost 42 million society in 2000. By 2000, the highest number of general people visited LaGuardia airport at just below 70 million. Other two airport visitors were almost same in the last span, which were nearly 42 million. Overall, it can be observed that LaGuardia and Newark airport visitor ratio was increased respectively; and, John. Fm Kennedy visitor ratio was fluctuated over the period. Another interesting point is that LaGuardia airport was most popular at the end.

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. Interestingly
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visitors
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Overall
, it can be observed
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airport
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visitor
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respectively
; and, John. Fm Kennedy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitor
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 was most popular at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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