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I really enjoyed coming to Sapa to travel and explore. Sapa is one of the most beautiful landscapes in Vietnam attracting a large number of tourists. From Hanoi to Sapa takes about 6 hours. do you know the reason i like sapa? Like I said before, because it's beautiful, the food is also varied and delicious, the climate is chilly. Moreover, I think the people of Sapa are very friendly and hospitable. I want to learn about the people, cultural identity, customs, daily life. . . there and even climbing to the top of Fansipan mountain. Thinking about that makes me very excited. Me and a few close friends have planned or gone to Sapa when the epidemic situation is well controlled across the country. Let's join hands to fight the covid-19 pandemic so we can complete the unfinished business!
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really
enjoyed coming to
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Sapa
to travel and explore.
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Sapa
is one of the most
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beautiful
landscapes in Vietnam attracting
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a large number of
tourists. From Hanoi to
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Sapa
takes about 6 hours.
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do
you know the reason
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like
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sapa
? Like I said
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,
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beautiful
, the food is
also
varied and delicious, the climate is chilly.
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, I
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think
the
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people
of
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Sapa
are
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very
friendly and hospitable. I want to learn about the
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people
, cultural identity, customs, daily life.
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.
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.
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there
and even climbing to the top of
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Fansipan
mountain. Thinking about that
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makes
me
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very
excited. Me and a few close friends have planned or gone to
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Sapa
when the epidemic situation is well controlled across the country.
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Let
's
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join
hands to fight the
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covid-19
pandemic
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so
we can complete the unfinished business!

IELTS essay write about which place you want to go

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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