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one day you was sitting in the living room

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One day I was sitting in the living room, chilling with the music at usual. Then my phone rang, so I got up and take the phone up. It was strange number so I didn't pick up and just let it be there for a while the phone had stopped. It turned to 10 pm I was sitting in my room to do my homework. All of sudden the phone rang again, it still that number I wonder who could it be? I suddenly remembered a spiritual story in late night so I still didn't pick up the phone. That strange number started texting, when I read the message, I realized that they received the wrong caller with the wrong number. So I texted back to said that they got the wrong person but they kept calling and texting no matter how many times I explained that they called the wrong number. I texted back one last time and they finally stopped.
One day I was sitting in the living room, chilling with the music at usual. Then my
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IELTS essay one day you was sitting in the living room

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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