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Nowadays, freedom for girls is the more important thing in our country. There are several villages where their society plays a vital role in women's discrimination. In backward areas, if a girl child is born at any house so, their society member also says it is a girl, it is a burden these type of stupid lines. To overcome, this issue people should understand girls children also want the same respect and rights in their life as boys. Secondly, parents should provide higher education to their girl child which creates better employment opportunities related to their career. Furthermore, the government should take strong action against women's violence. There are several fields where women are better than boys such as government jobs.
Nowadays, freedom for
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is the more
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thing in our country. There are several villages where their society plays a vital role in women's discrimination. In backward areas, if a
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girl
child
is born
at any
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house
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so
, their society member
also
says it is a
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girl
, it is a burden these type of stupid lines. To overcome, this issue
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people
should understand
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girls
children
also
want the same respect and rights in their life as boys.
Secondly
, parents should provide higher education to their
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girl
child which creates better employment opportunities related to their career.
Furthermore
, the
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government
should take strong action against women's violence. There are several fields where women are better than boys such as
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government
jobs.
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IELTS essay write about True Freedom for Girls? what are the solution or causes.

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